Brian_Cevallos

I mean, if you go down the D&D style stories and pocketmana is gambling related then it's to be expected. most bards like to gamble whether it's cards or dice.

seriously becoming a glass Canon.. .

just .... no

Writing this and im not even through chapter 62 but so far very interesting plot line and build up. Random encounters happen early with short build up. Story and conversations play out like a script rather then a novel but its understandable/legible. The world itself and side characters could use a bit more intro build up but its still the early stages. As long as the main character and plot isnt rushed too much it is looking like a great potential. Writing mistakes and grammar could use some review edit before posting but not as bad as many othrr novels out there.