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It turned out not very convenient, I just forgot about the existence of such a character. After looking through her story, I realized my mistakes. So, all my claims about Elijah are invalid, and as for the city of Volgograd, which for some reason became Stalingrad in the 2000s, this is an absurd mistake by the author, but I hope he will correct it.

Author, thanks for explaining. But this does not change the fact that she ended up in Volgograd. She was born in Germany, so in my opinion, it would be logical to assume that she would have lived there somewhere. But if you want her to live in Russia, then it is better to choose the libt Moscow or St. Petersburg, because she is looking for a "noble" family, and what she does in Volgograd is a mystery. It is one of the most criminal cities in Russia. Also, in addition to Yamoskva and St. Petersburg, one could choose Kaliningrad, in the past Könnigsberg. But this is not my work, so I cannot tell you what to do. But understand, you need to do at least some research before writing about life in a country where you may have never been.

Author, I like your work, but it is worth noting that Ilya is a man's name. Also, Stalingrad was renamed Volgograd in 1961. It is worth adding where this oni-chan postfix came from. What is this nonsense. Do your research first before writing about anything.

And if they still make her their slave ... Let Raiser use his ability to manipulate blood to cleanse her, and if the devils want to interfere in any way, let Raiser blow up some part of the devil's body. Why is it so radical? Because either Raiser will make friends with Akeno, or Jeanne.

The author, thanks for the great work, and as for the question, in my opinion, it is worth choosing the third option. But I also want to add that since Akeno is the daughter of one of the rulers of Gregory, it is worth describing a more aggressive reaction to becoming devil and becoming a sluo than what you described with Kiba. All the same, Akeno is not anyone.

The author is a great piece, but there is a problem. ENOUGH TO USE Enter THROUGH EACH SENTENCE. Thx.

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Author, I am very glad that you decided to rewrite your work. But could you please delete the previous chapters, this is misleading. I am also very glad that you decided to change the ideology from just killing all Muggles to controlling Muggles from the shadows. Why can't you kill all Muggles? The answer is simple. This is simply impossible, on the planet (at the time of 1990) 5.3 billion and on the strength of 30% are magicians and from 30% of about 20 they are half-breeds whether Muggle-born. Draw conclusions. It seems to me that Gellert should throw this idea, because in custody he had plenty of time to think it over and understand that his desire to kill all Muggles is simply ridiculous by the sheer number of these same Muggles.