Welcome back! Really missed the chapters🙏

Trial

The entire chapter needs “trail” changed to “trial”

Congrats on 100! 🎉 🎊 🎉

Great chapter really liking the development of events and reveals please keep it up 🙏

Loving what you’re doing so far, the writing isn’t perfect but it’s still readable and doesn’t take away too much from the story. I am really looking forward to you introducing nuzlocke’s and peoples reactions to such a way to play the game. That being said please keep going 🙏

We will be here 🫡 Thanks for not dropping 🙏

Thanks for another great chapter 🙏

To be fair, the world record is nearly 2 hours 😂

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Loving the story so far keep up the great work 🙏

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.

Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.

In case this isn’t evident by you having no likes on this comment, and 9 on the comment below, you’re dead wrong.

You going to implement Pokémon rangers as well? Seems like a great means of protecting Pokémon in One Piece

Welcome back! Thanks for not dropping 🙏

Nope, sliver is correct. Silver is completely wrong.

Thanks for another chapter glad you’re still going 🙏

All will bow before the bringer of corn 👑