DarthRampage

if nothing in life is free and I understand that you want to get something out of this but you also have to understand that you are using characters from other authors for your story, if it were a story where it is originally yours and not a fanfic that is something else you could charge what you want for it but with fanfics at least look at the method of the other authors on this platform in how they publish their fanfics since they always say that if you want to go 20 chapters ahead of the story they are reading they can pay since they are releasing free chapters as time goes by to keep people interested, they don't publish the first 20 chapters and then you say they have to pay to see more and then go publishing chapters where the only content is that you say pay to read them this causes that one loses interest since from my point of view one reads fanfics to kill time and distract oneself not to spend money on works that use characters from other series/man ga/novels/books/movies among others.

You said it yourself, 30 dirty thugs, which means that only some of them will have the ability, but the rest are cannon fodder, instead I am a strong warrior who is overwhelmed but still has the possibility of getting out of that predicament and then going after you, instead of 30 thugs it is better that you tell me a well-trained assassin who would wait for me in my weakest coin to kill me

what do you expect from the only species on the planet that kills its own species for the slightest nonsense, despite being "civilized" we are the only race that seeks the best ways to kill each other, I would be surprised if in the future our species survives and evolves as is the natural cycle of things

in reality, in the middle ages downwards what mattered was strength because with this if you are strong, you had respect, fear, prestige, women and money it was a thing of the strong live the weak die, currently everything is more money than anything else, for fantasy worlds strength is important since even the nobles who are the richest fear the strong ones who can literally erase them if they wish

If it were worlds like Naruto, Dragon Ball or Pokemon, to mention that they are the most common in giving more "freedom" to children, it would be understood and could be done without any problem. in naruto there is not so much problem since if he is an orphan they leave him to a certain extent (the main character was left to grow up alone but with the anbu guard watching over him without them intervening unless his life is in danger), if he is a "genius" already Whether you are a civilian or a member of a clan, you can enter the academy early and graduate quickly (in times of war, for example: Kakashi and Itachi). In dragon ball, if he is born as a sayan, neither is it, since when they are just babies, their power is measured and, depending on this, they are sent to a certain planet to conquer it. and let's not talk about pokemon, in My Hero Academia it is much more difficult to let a child wander alone and without supervision throughout the country with so many laws and villains that there are

Ophis will ask you to join her.

interesting a gabriel yandere i like

kill him just kill him

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