The One Who Stayed.(Overlord)

I love this man's work and I want more people to know him, in the description I put his Discord and his FFN(FanFiction,Net) user. .................................

Well if you are looking for overlord fanfiction its not for you because it lose the feel of the overlord just think this story is isekai story but with overlord skin

Thirty-something chapters in and I am finally comfortable in giving it a definitive seal of approval. Beginning may seem a bit copypasted with some tiny new bits and pieces added, but thankfully it eventually wildly diverges from the original plot into a different direction and fully becomes its own story. A solid read, truly.

I dropped it. it's a harem sham. albedo being albedo and I don't like her. beta mc can't control his underlings is so overlord like but I don't like how it ended on him. I read up to the part where's dragon queen was rescued but it took tooo long. .. .. I'm already loosing interest when albedo become prominent in the arc, but when she become stable character, ugh. .. . sebas has lolj and brain got lucky half elf. nirfea got wolf in heat as queen and trashclimb even climb the status ladder. the others got good development but ainz(mc) got worse. he got albedo and it would be nice if he could control her but he couldn't. it's not amusing at all.

he killed hamster. . .

I just want to warn new readers to not read this comment because its only purpose was to lower the rating of this novel I just want to warn new readers to not read this comment because its only purpose was to lower the rating of this novel

The worst kind of trash writing. It's actually good with small drawbacks, until the author decided to make everyone stupid and illogical. in the beginning, it was just a few people and ignorable, and Ainz is the biggest headache but only in one way, then the work takes a dumpster dive after chapter 200 or so and by chapter 350 far too many people are hopelessly stupid and it starts to read like a bad drama or soap opera. Don't Read This Work. I never go this far in any reviews. If you do read this work, skip anything having to do with Ainz and his relationship with albedo, and either of their insecurities and then stop circa chapter 200. since then I was just pushing through trying to ignore the problems as they became more and more frequent. If the work was an A- at the beginning, by the time it got to chapter 200 it was a c, after that I give it a tentative D- and by 350 All potential is completely ruined by bad logic, paper thin characters, forced plot and character development and the obvious husk of a work the author really should have stopped writing long ago. I felt so strongly about this, I created a list to put it in for works that are this particular kind of bad.

I will not read more, not because it's bad but because its not my cup of tea.

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this is the best overlord fanfiction ive ever read and it updates every day with many chapters. the grammar is also good and its a good change to the original story of overlord and makes sence

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Is ains still immortal unless killed, not aging or what are the specics of the race change. I might missed it but i never read what the specific bonus were gained or lost from the world item.

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So far I've read up to chapter 73 and It's a "what if" scenario that shows Ainz as a developing human in a new world. The changes are good and makes sense as he shows his humanity more. Removing the emotion dampener was a good plot change. And then a total change until it became its own story. My only complaint is that I don't know why it has the Harem Tag, so far it hasn't shown any relationship that looks harem, I don't know if in future chapters, but it's not what I expected, maybe I'll continue it later

This is an amazing novel for about 200 chapters but around the 230-260 range it gets god awful. The choices ainz makes get dumb stupid.

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The synopsis might be like that, but the chapters themselves have good grammar. The story being a "What if" scenario so far has been quite good in retrospect to other Au that exists. The characters are on point (Tho I've only watched the anime and have not read the novel) although with Ainz's restored humanity came along emotions, which is quite different from Overlord Ainz, but i guess that's an Au for ya. Tho it did make it less "dark" if you will. The updates are quite adequate, enough to not let you die of thirst from waiting. And finally, world background is the same, with some minor differences due to butterfly effect, but that's what makes it exciting, to see what is new, and what changed. Overall, it is as what you'd expect from a fanfiction.net fanfiction.

5 star across all categories. It's a "what if" scenario that shows Ainz as a developing human in a new world. The changes are good and makes sense as he shows his humanity more. Removing the emotion dampener was a good plot change.

Solid first 100 a lot of chapters and arcs that could definitely be condensed and I didn't really like where the story went in general. Also while the main character is not like Ainz from the show I don't even think he acts like the main character's Pre-Overlord self. The whole Ainz and Albedo dynamic was cool at first but was overshadowed by Ainz's demeanor and insecurities. I kept asking myself would he really feel so guilty about what he did pre-transfer? It seems forced to stretch out the Ainz and Albedo relationship arc. He seems to act like a super moral and ethical teenager. I get it that he is human now but he is a middle aged Japanese man that roleplays as a dark lord type character so it still seems odd that he hangs on to this arbtrary moral standard for so long If you are able to ignore that side plot the main plot is pretty solid but can still feel stretched.

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