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Thank you for the chapter! I have a question though: during the Clone Wars, will he use his own men as troops, or will he use droids, and if so, will he have his own factory?

An idea Paul, who had seen every future, chose a different one from what you might know. Paul enacting the voice forced the feeble emperor to write a decree forging a marriage between his daughter and Paul, and following this, Paul killed everyone in the emperor's delegation. Leaving only the princess, Paul knew the great houses would want war. Knowing the great house knew little of the happenings on Dune, he forged a new truth. He clamed that the emperor was assassinated by House Harkonnen, saying House Atreides, late in their duty's, failed to save the emperor, even leading to the death of Duke Leto, and the Baron, seeing the Duke the man who was like his son dead he decided to aid Paul and in his dieing breath he wrote a decree leave his daughter hand in the hand of Paul. (I know there are some pot holes left in this story) Later I would have Paul die and become the brother of the emperor but only a time skip after a fight with the rest of house Harkonnen and killing the son of Feyd.

Author: I know what directions to take the story! Also Author: lol I chose the no more chapter direction wahahahahaha!

With the money he makes couldn’t he develop his own clown factory in secret? And thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Better yet, go make your own fanfic so someone else can chastise you over what you enjoy doing.

Why don’t you go read a real book?

I would recommend reading!!! This is a well thought out story especially when you compare it to other works on this site. An as long as its not another Skywalker remake I’m greatfully satisfied.

Hey Arthur, I don’t know if this is a concern to you, but you should try to work more on using the correct genders for characters; you seem to mix up he and she for male and female characters!

I personally think this is a good story idea; it's not another Anakin pov fanfic, which is already a thumbs up from me, and although the grammar isn’t 10 out of 10, it's still better than some of the other fanfics I’ve read.

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Is it a Lelouch/Zero situation?

Thank you for the chapter! What’s the name of the original?

Do you have a reference image?

Shouldn’t it be until Roberts rebellion? Since it’s a year before.