ElisInForeverland
I'm a 22 year old aspiring author, though for now I work at a Vet Clinic. I love fantasy so that's what most of my works are. Feel free to add me on Instagram @elisinforeverland
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ElisInForeverland4 years agoCommentéI love sewing Finn's POV, though I do wish you'd gone into more detail on why he was still with other girls after finding his mate even though he liked her. Great job though!
- ElisInForeverland4 years agoCommenté
This chapter was great! I noticed a few minor grammer or spelling mistakes but nothing major. I look forward to the next chapter ♡
- ElisInForeverland4 years agoPosté
Although thr Grammer is a sometimes a little off it isnt bad enough to really take away from the story, which itself is really addicting. I hope to see ot updated soon
- ElisInForeverland4 years agoCommenté
I really hope you continue soon, I am really enjoying your story ♡
