ObsidianBLK
I'm an Editor and an avid reader. Working on a few stories of my own but haven't published anything.
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dis dude dead.
he could always counter with, "Remeber, I'm Raven's twin. we're the same age."
she gonna snack up Franky in a heartbeat.
her first instinct. 'Ahhhhh yea! somone to force paperwork off on to!'
50 meters is quite a significant distance. about 164 ft.
guess the author is, going with the no alien version.
well... this is an AU, so I guess changing the way the cave does it is fair game.
never doubt who his dady is. kek
observation Haki. first form.
or he could devote more time to training senjutsu, instead of peeping.
mode*
that's a terrifying concept. Sage more 7 gates...
the last six paragraphs could have been two sentences.
This MC has a major issue going off on tangents that expound on whatever he is thinking about that end up breaking the immersion with all of his over explaining. I get that the story is slow paced. but this is taking it way too far. I hope all this info dump stuff stops happening once he gets older. because I am getting tired of chapters being 10+ pages of exposition that adds nothing to progressing the plot.
give that Magnaton an electric stone. go even further beyond.
... man, the Chinese have some sayings that don't translate well.
please don't let there be more ntr in this. at least here's hoping there isn't any more.
Can't be. It works too hard to be a Nara.