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it was supposed to be Lower Bound - Upper Bound, which means that the lower bound is 53 and upper is 53
thank you. i really appreciate it. I hope there will be a day when I come back and start writing again. currently i am very busy, maybe in 6-7 months
he cant know the difficulty of creating techniques. he thought that it will take a few months or 1-2 years. i will edit it, though
in new novel ive decided that the system wont be part of mc's life
bcs he attacked his wife. wu li is a hypocrite
yes, its just that its written in a funny manner
yes, but it will take time for his character to become interesting. he barely faced any hardships. ty for being with me on this journey!
i dont like this chapter that much either. i tried to make it as interesting and it took me a while to make his transformation more "human-like" however, i am quite confident that the mc was always shown as someone that isnt unreasonable and doesnt kill. i am sorry you didnt like the chapter. do you have any ideas on how i can improve it?
thank you for the review! i appreciate your feedback. i wanted to say that he isnt unbothered by wordly things. you can see that he is greedy, afraid of most danger(he doesnt want to lose points and he also fears death), and also, he is also hardworking since thats his personality trait(at the beginning, he became an engineer with an average intelligence) also, i tried to make him aware of the power that he has, but it seems i didnt make it right. i made him think of a way for future reincarnations, which i think showed that he is aware of the powers that the system has. you are right though, the mc is not memorable, I dont like him at all either. i am still learning and i like that you gave me feedback.
i mean, it barely took more than 10s for him to say that. he also wants to torture people mentally or physically, so yeah, he is that petty
thats of course
he sacrificed himself to block ye sha. thats exactly why i placed so much emphasis on the fact that the other elders still had a wisp left.
earth grade is quite rare for pills. black grade pills help in core formation and nascent soul(depending on the pill), and earth grade help in soul palace and great ocean. 10 years isnt that much,especially since you will build tolerance towards it
any thoughts? did you like the continuation?
no, he didnt switch the Dao Marks. pretty sure i mentioned that he doesnt want to change them after seeing the new Dao Marks, unless i deleted that paragraph.(ill check) As for whether or not he'll form an essence foundation, it will be revealed later.
he freaks out because of the wine(it makes it so that if he has a small flaw, it will be revealed). also, he is literally around ~45 years old(combined age from his past life + this one), coupled with the fact that he hasn't passed the age of 30 in both of his lives, it will make him seem impatient compared to other immortals who have lived for many years. even if he knows that at some point he will surpass wu li, when is it going to be? 10000 years? 100k? 1million? to be fair, I also wanted to progress the plot a little bit further, I just hope that it didn't feel too forced.