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balls_11241yrRépondu à Leon_Brittonchildren. on here, its man children. pick your poison
Gojo didn't look through her photos, he was invading her privacy already, he didn't need to go even further. Lastly, he looked through her Wattpad account. To his surprise, she didn't read any novels on it, instead, she wrote.- balls_11241yrCommentéCh 1 Chapter one: I'm confused
- balls_11241yrRépondu à Lord_DisasterCh 3 Chapter 3
- balls_11241yrRépondu à TheDNAlienCh 27 Chapter 27
- balls_11241yrRépondu à LordmoonlightCh 1 Maidenless? But I already have a Firekeeper.
- balls_11241yrPosté
i swear, if I have another person telling me that they dropped the fic due to ntr really need to get their brains checked. Read the chapter closely and understand the damn context. or do you just think that a simple fucking is enough to solve everyone's problems? I swear, some peolle are more insecure than the character I wrote with self esteem issues.
- balls_11241yrRépondu à Sp1cy_Potato
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- balls_11241yrRépondu à ReginleifCh 24 Chapter 24
- balls_11241yrRépondu à ReginleifCh 24 Chapter 24
- balls_11241yrPosté
its alright I suppose. The grammar is pretty good, and the story flow nicely. Though, the characters feel a bit too one dimentional. Also, this might just be a personal thing, but there isnt enough descriptions for the environment. Sure its fanfic and relies on the reader to have prexisting knowledge of how things look, but a little bit more couldve helped. other than that, the fic is pretty solid.
- balls_11241yrRépondu à Magn0lia
yeah
Drawing her summon sign on floor beneath me using my gloved finger, a flash of yellow light shone from the letters, and in an instant, the figure of my beloved companion came from it, blindfold and all. A soft bittersweet smile curved on my lips, as we both shared a moment of silence together. - balls_11241yrRépondu à Nekomiko_succubus
sounds like a you problem
So, removing my pants, she now had full unfiltered access to my dick. Code: Red Alert. Mission Critical. She's inserting it inside! "Th-is brings back memories." She moans out grabbing at my chest for stability. I didn't have any time to react before Salter started to bounce around on top of my meat stick. - balls_11241yrRépondu à FrightKnight88Ch 15 Battle at the Evergaol
- balls_11241yrRépondu à David_Drake
- balls_11241yrRépondu à Danny_Butts
nurgal isnt a chaos god. fuck, it isn't the same name. I got it from the Mesopotamian god, not wh
""In nothing more than a snap, I could have thine body liquified, right here and now. And to go even further, thy plan is to go so far as to mock me."" She stated in a threatening voice.