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Drinking age is 21
I felt relief wash into my body when she said her age. I didn't question how she bought her drinks in the bar…or well, I never thought to question it. Since even I drank when I was younger before, it isn't hard to get a fake ID. - Kyran_Ambrosius20hCommenté
Yes
Steel also promised to let me have my own night, since he was actually doing calculations to break the code for the invisibility Turbo mode. - Kyran_Ambrosius1dCommentéCh 60 (A) Desire for Strength
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Why would he need to steal a sword he could litterly just ask for one
Callum snuck in the armory and grabbed an sword with an scabbard. He snuck again past the guards and left towards his training spot. When he arrived at his training spot he put the sword down and changed into his new clothes. When he was done changing, he took the sword out of the scabbard and gave it a few swings. - Kyran_Ambrosius2dCommenté
Hold on hes no prince now. Hes now the archmage
One of the guards went inside of the throne room. After five minutes the guard came back. " You may enter the throne room prince Callum." - Kyran_Ambrosius2dCommenté
Bros an expert duelist.
[Ding host has opened the starter bag. You have received: Count Dooku template(Semi-Legendary), 500 system points, an old rusted sword(common) and an clothing voucher(common).] - Kyran_Ambrosius2dCommentéCh 13 Chapter 13 Eyes see the truth.
- Kyran_Ambrosius2dRépondu à Ravio_The_Thief
- Kyran_Ambrosius2dRépondu à Sabaroth_zarkiel
I think that he doesnt is kinda the point hes just a guy.
"Hollings. Chloe Hollings," the woman replies with a warm smile, shaking Brian's proffered hand. - Kyran_Ambrosius2dPosté
this story has been a sunspot and the time since I have found it. It seems that most all that was on this app was just a cesspool of filth. There was no substance. it is truly amazing when gems like these pop out they make this app worth using there is character world building background of what’s going on and twists. You don’t expect like thing with Angela in chapter 5 and six. Every chapter has been a delight and a wonder. My one and only grievance is that there wasn’t 100 chapters what I found it but I hope one day will get there.
- Kyran_Ambrosius2dCommentéCh 3 Chapter 3 Drinks
- Kyran_Ambrosius3dRépondu à Fav_is_Romance
But whats the point in him being that strong? Whats the point of a story with out any sort of substance or struggle to it. If theres no need to struggle or even loose a fight. Than we already know whats gonna happen. i’m going to guess with out reading a single chapter that your character is probably transmigrated into marvel. He made a few wishes he’s going to either start at the beginning of time or really early into the story and then work on his divinities and gain power, or he’s going to spawn maybe a little before Canon maybe a little in the middle of it he will be confused about what’s going on for a little bit maybe have a slight panic attack or something and then it’s gonna be the same thing all over again get stronger weirdly fast he’s gonna have a family or some kind of love interest maybe a few. He’s going to get into a few fights. Maybe he’ll struggle a little bit in the beginning, but then he’ll win. He won’t get trounced. He won’t be beaten. He won’t learn any sort of real lesson no and he’s just gonna keep doing the trouncing thing without any real story. There will be no lessons no character growth. He won’t learn anything hell even Sheldon in big bang became less annoying as The series went through. He got a wife. Had kids learn how to value others. I feel like i keep reading the same 10 stories on this app. There all the same with a few golden ones that shine through. That make u feel somwthing. I can guess this one probally isnt it. Also to let u know i will more than likely not be able to read any comments made as the screen won't even load.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Kyran_Ambrosius3dPosté
Writing quality 2 updating stability 3 Story 1 Character 1 World background 1 The reason I’m giving this review is that the writing quality is poor at best no hate to the author, but he’s constantly asking questions second-guessing his own decisions within the first 15 chapters. He’s changed his own decisions like three times. there’s 50 chapters within a month of it being out I don’t know if he just stockpile chapters or something so I’m gonna give that a three The story is a one because there is no real story. There’s nothing really going on besides porn without plot, which I understand some people enjoy but even then it’s not even very good porn. I gave character a one because there is no real character. It’s just a Gary stew who can apparently do no real wrong and women love him just because you decided it you decided to be completely unrealistic with body proportion, which is your decision and your free to make it. You can’t make the character stick to one thing at a time. you gave him bullshit powers that were never actually used and it went from 0 to 100 in power scaling real fucking fast. i’d give world background a zero if I could not because I hate your work, but simply because there is no real background, you haven’t really explored the characters first life but is fine. You don’t have to, but you’ve gone into nothing about the background characters, the scenery what’s going on behind the scenes. You established nothing. overall, if you’re just looking into some sort of porn Fick, that’s fine. This is for you, but if you’re looking for something with a little bit of substance character, progression of any kind morals and story or any sort of struggle. So essentially things that actually make a story, this is not for you Keep writing author mabye youll make an actual book one day. But keep at it. A real review.
- Kyran_Ambrosius3dRépondu à Virusban
Yujiro shows up and slaps him to death. Afterall bro stoped a cataclysmic earthquake by squating.
"This ultimate humungousaur then let's add…" Morty began to add other aliens where he was able to grow extra limbs becoming a mixture of Four arms and Humungousaur having the same features as Biomatrix. - Kyran_Ambrosius3dCommenté
Ah yes the allpowerful time god.
'All according to plan. Once this issue is done I'll head to Ben 10 verse. Hopefully I don't meet Professor paradox by entering the time stream.' - Kyran_Ambrosius3dRépondu à Try_hard
To be fair dracula has the power of an infinite universe.
Maybe I'll even make my mc visit Castlevania and have Slypha. - Kyran_Ambrosius3dCommentéCh 3 Goddess
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Bodybuilding isnt about strength its about sculpting a body fit for aesthetic competition
I had defined pecs, ripped abs, chiseled arms, I had the V on my waist, my baby fat was completely gone now one has a completely white skin like porcelain which when touched was incredibly soft and had also grown a little more. My physique was similar to Garou in that it focused on flexibility and strength rather than bodybuilding.