J96keen

loving this so much my dude please keep it coming. looking forward to some more chapters

Rebecca she needs and deserves some love

Ice please not many writers make a character that uses Ice often

good luck on the exams man and can't wait till you start writing again

I'm liking this one

finish this one please I love the story that you've got going but I would like to see some more of your work with other Story's as well keep up the good work my friend and I hope that you can find peace with your father's passing

Timat

don't let the negiteve affect your story brother you do you and if someone doesn't like what you have made welp there's the door don't let it hit you on the way out as I see it. all and all I'm loving the story keep up the good work

yes

We need more. can't wait till new chapters