98 Oof

Someone left a review today, it wasn't a particularly good review but the person clearly stated their views and the reason for their views and why the book only got 2.5 stars

Don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining because I agree completely for the most part, so my advice for people who fall under the category that person stated " mature and self sufficient " should stop here

Because I can tell you now, Michael will have no rapid development or change in character any time soon

Yes for a grown man he can act childish and may seem to act on only whims at times, that's a benefit of being able to live for several centuries to thousands of years, you don't have to act your age because it becomes pointless after a while

" oh I'm 1000 years old, so I should act like dust? "

The reason why Michael lack character development is for 2 reasons

1. Michael was a grown man is his previous life, mercenary/bounty hunter whatever you want to call it, so he had no issue with killing people unlike most reincarnators

He was a man whore, meaning he had no lack of physical interactions with women, so how can he act like a virgin?

Emotional attachments on the other hand....not so much, so he just goes with what feels right, doesn't limit his decisions to logical thoughts

2. I currently can not write in detail about something I've never in my life experienced, I'm twenty. I don't know about those of you reading this but

How many of you have experienced dying because of someone else's greed?

(hence his warped view towards humans. When I say warped I mean in the sense that if he was to see humans raping,killing, enslaving he wouldn't react nor be surprised as in his mind " as expected of humans ")

How many of you have experienced dying then being forced to live again by the whims of someone who could kill you with a booger?

How many of you have experienced dating 20-30 people at once? each of which was because of emotional attachment and not lust?

Superiority complex? How many of you have have the power to level a city block? move at several times the speed of sound? have vitality that can leave wolverine in the dirt?

If you have experienced any of the above...well damn what a life but I first hand haven't, so my apologies for failing to write those experiences in detail, I may reach there someday but that's not now

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Yes there's still a chapter later today