Jules_West
If only I didn't have to sleep, I might have enough time for all my hobbies...
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Of course not😂 you can access the lock from both the inside and outside; it works the same with my house's lock.
Hah, right, that's wrong; thanks for noticing it!
As stated in my introduction, I write in British English and not American English. Fetal is correct, but Foetal is also right in this situation, as I'm writing in British English.
Hah, thank you for noticing the mistake! Dutch just influenced my writing :) I meant tea, which is thee in dutch. My autocorrect didn't correct it; this is why readers are so valuable!
No reviews? 1,3 million views? 3,48K collections? Why doesn't this novel have no reviews?! Well, dear reader, I've removed all the reviews because they were from the old story, not the new one that will be posted soon or has already been posted here. So why are you posting your review, then? To make sure new readers also know what is happening. For now, you can still read the old novel, but in about 3 to 4 days, that will change, and those chapters will also be removed. But new readers, don't be scared away, because in about 3 to 4 days; new chapters will be posted with, in my opinion, a hundred times the quality than the chapters are right now! So if you have spare time, add this novel to your library and give it a read this Sunday or Monday!
Ah, well, it's more or less a rewrite and a remaster; I'm changing Kuro's (He'll also get a new name) motivation entirely. Initially, he was moving forward without a point. Now, the focus will be more or less on returning Elysia to the human continent. Characters will be more fleshed out and act their age. For example, Daena is pretty young but doesn't act like it, at least in my opinion. I'm also removing stuff that didn't make sense and giving it a more realistic spin. So, in the end, it's more or less a rewrite but using the original story as a basis to craft a new and exciting story, which will hopefully be a lot better than the previous attempt. But you'll see for yourself when I release the first 13 or more chapters, which will probably be coming out around September. And for messing up the story, that'll hardly happen as my story is so poorly written that improvement is the only way this story can go!
This is a myth, humans use way more that 10% of their brain. Even for the most basic of functions a human needs their intire brain. It’s just something the film industrie came up with. But take everything I say with a grain of salt, I only read books I’m not some brain scientist.
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You really need an editor. You make so many grammar mistakes.
There is only one song that could be used: The only thing they fear is you