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Nekoman1dRépondu à YourAverage_ReaderThey are full of tattoos (like the pagans) but wear minimum armour and a helm that resembled broe helmet with horns attached on it like vikings. Their armaments are closely attached to the viking' culture too.
The barbarian jumped from his position, like a jumping frog, he was already in front of the squad of watchmen. He slashed at them horizontally from east to west with his great axe. But the squad was ready to accept his attack.- Nekoman1dRépondu à YourAverage_Reader
left because the horse sped away, leaving him
The axe sharpened edge slashed on the tail of the horse. The barbarian left exhausted with air exhaled out of his respiratory system. - Nekoman2dRépondu à YourAverage_Reader
The watchmen are a ragtag group, at first, at least. Many of its members, veterans of war, criminals, ordinary citizens with many conflicting background and personality. They stood as the first line of defence is not for the land of some nobles, but for the families and people that lives in those land. For example, if you give some random dukes the land and have them protect it, they would only hear the news of an attack on some village they probably didn't care protecting about. That's where the watchmen came in duty, first line of defense, not to defeat the enemy but stall for time, reduce unwanted, unnecessary and innocent casualties before the knights and soldiers of those noble come.
They are the watchmen after all. A militia group formed by the Kingdom of Creopia, as a first line of defense against the dangers that walks outside its borders. With a low age expectancy, while having some of the most interesting stories to give out to their children. - Nekoman2dRépondu à YourAverage_Reader
Relax it's his first day :skull:
"Wi-will we b-be oka-okay sir?" Hubert asked, nervously. - Nekoman3dRépondu à YourAverage_Reader
The watchman, while being a body closer to those of militias group, are actually full of experienced warriors and soldiers, since they are the first line of defense for most borders, the nobles and populace alike sponsor them. The watchman are also one of the way to gain fame, defeating the barbarian of the north, indigenous tribes of the southern desert kingdom, pirates of the eastern coast and creatures of the western mountains, proved to be an effective way to raise through fame. While for some, it served as a place of exile. Guess we never know Gregorious Trilly's connection to the watchman, as he unfortunately met his doom along with his bodyguard of knight novices (hint)
This outpost housed a total of 20 watchmen, including Greyson, the captain of the watchmen of this post, Gregorious Trilly, a mage of the noble house of Trilly, and Hubert. - Nekoman2yrPosté
Well first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter
- Nekoman2yrRépondu à Mumil_Alfkeky
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- Nekoman2yrRépondu à Uchiwa_Madara
yea imagine they rap... you to reproduce hehehehe, wrong story sorry
Jiok cleared his throat, "Long time ago, approximately 700 years ago, goblins were feared. We are scary looking, many in number despite our low endurance. Even dragons would move their nest if goblins invaded them. But when someone, people said the son of heaven, came down from the sky, they began to invade us. One by one, our kingdoms fall, our homes burnt down, our race crushed. The survivors became slaves or pets for the humans and because of that, we evolved. Slowly but surely, we came small and cute looking, but I knew goblin's instinct is still sharp" - Nekoman2yrRépondu à gsm1r
Ah sorry, might have confused the names with my others books. Yea I'm improving :") Sorry if there are not many detail cause this book is actually rushed for a competition, you should drop it if you don't like it though
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Nekoman2yrRépondu à RDMON
still the beginning lol, dun worry
The old man that bought him led into the corner of the room and kicked his tummy once again. His small body bashed against the wall, his eyes looked up, only to see that the old man was slowly approaching with his fist clenched. - Nekoman2yrRépondu à Arthur_Leywin1
why not lol
The only thing that was annoying was a little boy, sitting on the floor with the three little goblins, looking like they just played a little match of WWE smackdown with the boy. But what surprised him were the boy's words, "Let's play 1 round of WWE smackdown once again!" - Nekoman2yrRépondu à Hugo_Smits
it's a small stream... It doesn't stay in one place, so it's pretty safe. And I to be honest don't know but yea
He got himself up and saw a shallow and small ditch right in front of his eyes; the man tripped multiple times, but never once he fell to the ground. When he was right in front of the ditch, he connected his hands and drank the water.