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Author of Rise of the Legendary Emperor, Hitman with a Badass System & Anti Hero with a Symbiote System. Bringing stories to life and living through my characters.
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Update: Fixed the chapter and rewrote it completely. Please let me know how the chapter reads now
Hi, I noticed that but those chapters were written during when i had covid so i messed up pretty bad. But the upcoming chapters have been edited and you can see the difference
I can understand why you feel like that. And to be honest, i have mentioned in the chapter how Victoria's behaviour surprised Draven. There is a good reason why she attacked him, if you have read Moonblade arc, you might have guessed why
Thank you atlas. I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you again for taking the time to read my book
Just give it a go and read a few more chapters...you might want to stick around when he breaks out the prison
hello
If you dont interact with your reader, you can never be a better writer imo. that is why i always read all the comments and respond to them as much as i can
you just have to wait 2 chapters, not 300. I wrote long chapters bcz if i wrote short chapters, it will make u spend more coins until the MC appears. that is why i wrote long chapters when the MC is not in the chapter so u can get it over with in one single chapter
It should have been Noah's plan. Edited it
lol a funny mistake,it should be Gaya
it was a mistake. Updated the chapter. Please make sure to read it. Sorry for the mistake