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Dear Author you may find this review unreasonable and in that case you are right. How should i evaluate your work if i haven’t read anything of it. And to that i say screw you i will treat your novel like you treat your chapters. Without any respect. If you dont value the rules of this platform don’t expect others to do better. This might turn out to be the best novel ever or maybe the worst but i can’t tell because you did not even write 2000 words so how am i supposed to rate it. On a different tone i wish you the best of luck and hope that you can complete the word count without relying on this damned method. At that point i will delete my review.

Chinese Mtl

This Chapter was not really in sync with the rest of what quinn has shown so far. Still had fun reading it keep it up

Is not in Character why would someone who builds a connection based network just burn bridge’s. With someone who has a good network

This is not in Character even if you copied it from the book. Slughoorn saw Quinn hugging Marcus so it does not make sense dor Slughoorn to just drop Marcus. If he wants to be on good terms with quinn.

Thats nearly a perfect copy of the book chapter …

I think it's mostly my poor upload schedule but I think I cover could also help.

Uhh good point i will edit the chapter so the soul gets also destroyed :D

I just got to this feature that is also the reason why I answer this late. Yes he will be famous but for other reasons, so there will be no order of the William in that sense.

I am sorry for the late reply I did not found the time to visit this lovely site. They are the pets of William one is an overly grown Nundu and the other is a crossbreed between a Phoenix and an Occamy.