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while his changes from demon slayer aren't as much as I would hope for its already more than what most people do in the time stop different world cliche
its been good so far but I assume like most novels he won't change from his experience much no scars no aging and probably no change in temperament/personality that you would expect after years of fighting demons i don't know why most authors are afraid of giving their mc scars or realistic personality changes after being in a war/combat situations for a long time
I thought he was handsome? you mentioned it when he chuckled some chapters back i get being compared to supernaturally attractive vampires and being malnourished but he should be better than average no?
Its been good so far but you could do with not having every gacha pull be 9 broken characters and instead a couple and maybe strong artifacts/bloodlines/knowledge you could even give him a partner if he dislikes the ones from dxd
A Trained betrayed assassin and a emanator of nihility yet he doesn't kill people after his life? not very believable
Its been great so far. I'd say the only "criticisms" I have is the ptsd/trauma gets a little bit repetitive in the early chapters only because it feels like each episode is the same and the words both he and the people around him are the same but that could be realistic for ptsd irl im just not knowledgeable enough to know so if its normal disregard what I said and I'd like to see abit more shinji vs kaiju which i already assume is upcoming anyway keep up the good work
I think it depends on how he copes because j know some people completely shut down when confronted with their trauma where as others in war situations might prefer being surrounded by something they know rather than the world they don't
I wonder if he might try to return to the breach temporarily to relieve "stress" since its probably comfortable returning to something familiar where he can let loose but its also the source of his trauma so it's a double sided blade and might be worse or if he might try to return there permanently with how overwhelmed he is currently and how no one understands what he's been through
I expected the burst of anger to be earlier and the last log to be something like pure apathy just dead quiet no expression like a corpse
Yeah I disagree with sparing bandits and with making Kakashi a seasoned trained killer of what? 30+ years just knock them out he clearly killed on the train and these bandits aren't any better