Niche

Boring. The MC was reincarnated into the world of the novel with an adult's mentality, but he is still naive like a child, doesn't think ahead, is easily pressured by stronger people, and is not good at hiding his emotions. It seems like the author tried to make the MC as mature and calm as possible, but in my eyes it failed miserably. Each chapter feels more boring than the previous chapter. Authors need to learn how to make MCs look smarter, charismatic, and mature.

Pretty edgy so far

For god sake, use commas!

No. Instead, I'm a bit confused about the different between demon and devil.

Ugh.. I couldn't bear it with that nanodesu thing..

Ahh.. Finally we have some baddass MC with True Gender Equality.. How refreshing [img=update]

Beta

Oke author, kerja bagus. Sejauh ini Fate Arc adalah arc terbagus, sementara Daimidaler Arc adalah arc terburuk. Tolong pertahankan kualitas tulisanmu seperti arc ini.

So stupid

Trash