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avatar the last airbender

love it so far, but I think the "!" is used way too much. Someone is whispering or saying indifferently but the sentence ends with an exclamation mark. It always makes me pause.

let's agree that we disagree

it may sound pretentious but I see people with that kind of beliefs misguided.

if someone sees killing people as a good thing, 'in the right scenarios', it doesn't make it a good deed. There are other ways of stopping someone from killing. You could argue that it is necessary or that it will bring to something good as a consequence for the others, but the deed is not a good one.

I disagree about morals being subjective. Besides killing a serial killer makes you objectively a killer. I'm not saying you can't understand why would someone do that, but it doesn't make it a good deed.

There are many things that are objectively good or evil. As an example killing someone to save a person is good from that person's pov, but evil from the family of the dead person's pov. That's what means that it's relative. If you look at it objectively killing someone is evil and saving someone is good, at least in our culture.

I understand, it was just a bit of rant don't take it seriously. Plus you like to say plus a lot ))

nice chapter, the only thing is that you start too many paragraphs with then

every of your character uses this word "plus", it gives the impression that they all speak as if they were one person