Heavenly_Sage

Fiancée????????When the hell did this happen?

japanese name in ancient china when all the neighboring kingdoms are fighting each other? He would be seen as an outsider and be treated even lowly than commoners and at that period officials or anyone with even a shred of power could do anything they want to and get away with it, so not a nice choice.

the booty bandit strikes again...........

This and previous couple of chapter are kind of short and rage inducing other character thoughts and povs. Just get on with the battle we want to read actual cool stuff not be here like for 20 chapters for a fight scene.

ahhh hell naw. the booty bandit

can you do aashiqui 2?

You can do jackie chan's the myth.

tftc~

both are same bruh

brother first time ever writing a story and I don't know how to write an intelligent character yet. I would keep learning and thank you for your critic as it helps me to grow more.