CurseHandSr

or sha literally any combo of is given name.

fist I world like to say this is not a masterpiece because let's be real nothing is but I got to say Shiro-Cuz I am really impressed at what you have made among heaps of straight gar-boge I found something readable is at least what I thought at first bust the further i red, the more you carves out these characters I found myself transfixed by the story I would go in depth but you should just give a solid 50 you will love it the only thing I'm disappointed in is there are no ogren tin buddies.

just read it it gets more fleshed out as you go it is easily one of the best non-harem fanfic au's on here honestly im surprised at how much work was put in on each person if you don't believe me just read the last 4 chapters (117-121)

sicko

is this a harem I don't want to waste my time

Are you? The tag says weak to strong but he is op as heck after a couple chapters that's crazy! Tbh it doesn't matter to much but I like to know if it's a journey with a harem or the beginning of a perverted writer's delusional 2d hunger (btw author no hard feelings just go touch some grass the best writing is from experience sadly the harem-genre is kinda a joke think about it the girl/guy that you suddenly save is so overwhelmed with emotion that he/she can only thank "you" with her body? Gross. -NO-HAREM SECT Punishment Hall-~Daoist Curse calamity~Writing is a curse. A Calamity! Spread it with care.

if you don't get it that's fine I'm just personally tired of seeing "heros" who are literally "so nice" (aka ignorance at its best) they let go of things like people trying to kill them that's just madness. anyway hope you have a nice read it is still a good fanfic.

Writing quality is good story (nice job tl) development is pretty much from what I have read from 1-97 the progression goes like this i have a growing harem(no harem tag btw),chat group with realy drawn-out talks of every minute detail of every world and there development (later they go faster but not buy much)then suddenly,miraculously mc is like let's ruthlessly do some good old fashioned (nearly) genocide on the only black people in the anime weird, right? anyway atypical mc that "plays with" a whole bunch of ladies almost always says how smart he is. Usual "chocking the chicken behavior" some characters are fleshed out. Great concept worth a couple hundred chapters.

bro so he is not going to a villain/anti-hero anymore but a love sick 🤮 teenager that panders to the whimsical thought process of heros i.e a whole bunch of nonsense chapters of himself not solving the problems in front of him and letting them fester because he feels obligated to act more human when he is not human? (s.n nice pick on the l.i)