WinterLeaf
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The first person perspective in your novel is well blended with the storyline that you build. As the characters are dealing with the aftermath of the apocalypse, I can say that your story is marvellous. It's just your story is too 'short' that I find it hard to emphasize on some moments (Only some. Others are done beautifully). If you can make it a bit longer and add some details at certain points, I believe that it'll be emotionally great.
A shameless review from the author. I hope that you all can enjoy reading this novel. I'll truly be glad if you can leave any review and comment for the betterment of this novel. for grammatical errors, I hope that you can overlook it. I wish that someone would become the proofreader of this novel for free (well, I have no budget to hire the professional one). I'll try improving my Engliah so at least, ny writing can be 'readable'. Love from me