TrapOfRed
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it's good, the story's good, idk what else to say, it's just good. it's good to read, good grammar, easy to digest and likeable characters so far.
I'd say go for whatever. Your writing style is pretty fluid and the story premise is none like I seen before, if you prefer to rewrite it and you're happy with the rewrite, stick with it but if you wish to continue the old one, I'd also be down for it. The new chapter does seem to be a lot more fleshed out, the pacing in the old one while good, did feel a little quick. in conclusion, I'll leave it up to you, good book my g
One in the dungeon, another in the Hestia Manor and the last one being in the Elven Forest