CrowIey
Mais um viciado em novels e FanFics. Google translator user.
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2012
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I thought the ghost rider shouldn't allow innocent blood to be spilled, did the author forget that detail or in his story this is not a problem? Letting Harry get hurt to bring Voldy back to life shouldn't even be an option, after all the whole Ghost Rider plot isn't just about punishing sinners, but protecting the innocent.
Obviously the protagonist will appear to save the damsel in distress, in the Le Fay case, the author has already shown that they exchange messages, so when arthur and she are on the brink of death, the Mc will make his triumphant entry xD But I believe that taking 2 chapters for this was an exaggeration. Sorry if something was unclear, I use google translate.
nice
wow nice cap
I'm looking forward to Miguel's appearance in the story.
In this version of the story, who made the visit to Chloe's parents was Miguel, so he says some chapters ago that Chloe is practically his daughter, because her soul was shaped by him.
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I like, thanks for the cap
I am enjoying the story so far, and I would like to make a suggestion, I do not know if you have already talked about it in the later chapters, well I believe that it would improve the understanding of the degree of skills if they were grades (F -> E -> D -> C -> B -> A -> S -> EX). Colors can cause some confusion to remember, for example, that black means a more basic skill. Sorry for the english, I'm using google translator.