cryzsalix
I just enjoy putting my ideas into stories, seeing my characters come to life is very satisfying, and it's even more satisfying when people enjoy what I write. English is not my native language.
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Oh, I love Sandman. And I like very much this fanfic as well.
I usually have complaints with chapters like this, where little happens and everything seems like slice of life filler... but that's not the case at all with this fanfic. I love the casual flow as if they were really telling us the daily life of a superhero, and what there is not to love about Spider-Man, especially this version. Great management of the harem, love relationships, family and friendships.
It´s ok if she gets a little turned on by this, but please don´t make her degenerate and end up destroying her character. I don´t really believe you will do that, but fanfics have a reputation for that exact same thing.
Yeah, you already say it, like five times.
It's a bit exaggerated that between two spider heroes and Ace they couldn't win against the lizard before evolving or against Vermin, taking into account that originally a single spider-man was able to beat them all the time, but I'm still liking the story, and Peter and Gwen's new outfits are great.
To be fair, if I didn't like or enjoy this story I wouldn't be complaining in the comments. Sometimes I get frustrated or exasperated by how much it sometimes seems like Oleandra is playing life in hell mode, with everything that could go wrong always going wrong. With that aside, it's good to know that her sisters will have more important roles and you plan to delve into other characters, I really like the idea. In any case, with the bloodline thing, the annoying thing was that it failed twice in a row, and that no matter how much you give Oleandra other things, none of them give her hair color or cool fantasy traits or super long life expectancy. Still, thanks for the hard work and for responding to readers like me, I really love this fanfic.