well he is a mining corp slave since young so i would be more surprised if he was a "know it all" character with high iq and eq.

by now i really don't expect anything from authors. it is so unbelievable rare that an author knows hema or even larp. what most also get prong is production jobs. it is crazy how wrong some of them are shown. it's like the author didn't even bother to watch a single video about it.

Also please stop summarising and rechewing things that you just wrote about in an overly lengthy manner. reminder should be reserved for thinga that happened 30 to 100+ chapters ago and not 3 paragraphs ago.

man i really hate long self praise monologue about the genius of the author and how great the abilities are supposed to be. especially cases like this where the author is also dead wrong with his praise. parts like these take at least 2 stars away from how much i like the book.

yeah any talent that requires hunting to progress is quite bad because it is way too easy to keep him from hunting and completely stop his progress through that. if he had a passive growth talent, then i might see it as one of the better ones.

right now it is really weak. the strongest talent has a base requirement of "environmental energy absorption" that basically absorbs the energy passively and doesn't require any beast cores to get the energy. then the layering of other talents like "body strengthening", "energy control" and so on would make the talent more complete. there are way better and easier to use talents that don't require to mass hunt beasts to progress. his talent is useless when others keep him from hunting.

well it makes sense if it is an as cheap as possible mining Corp. just throwing lifes at it is probably way cheaper than installing high tech equipment. that said, it can be that the core of the mine is actually built out quite good and it is just the mine fingers that aren't.

is it bad that im so used to it that i don't even notice it anymore?

rewrite or just small edits?

its sad how little a good reputation is actually worth considering that a random person that is loud enough can destroy it completely without the other person being able to defend themselves. way too many lifes get destroyed by baseless rumours and accusations.

he needs a reason for the discrimination arc of the story. a reason to give the mc trouble at each step he takes.

the problem is that someone could choose a "punishment" as reward or something that can't easily transferred. for example if someone wishes as reaard that someone else dies or gets cursed, what part of that reward will he get? or if someone cursed/mind controlled wishes to die, does he then die too? dose he get injured/weakened instead? it is always better to restrict wishes like that behind additional choices and conditions.

well not quite. he should have set limits to it like that the reward can't hurt, curse, weaken or negatively influence him. or to make it easier, him being able to refuse rewards that he doesn't like.

he has such a hight mana capacity and regen. why isn't he converting that into spirit qi? it would be way less destructive to the surroundings.

ups. welp thats it.

it can be worse punishment than a death sentence.

but that ruines way too much of the meat...

making chocolate is one of the recipes where i wonder how they figured it out. it has many very specific steps.

there are many different types of that instrument. so im not surprised that the improvised version resembles another one. also xylophone and glockenspiel look almost the same.

yeah he is in copium denial. also we can't forget that dhe is currently just 14 so it isn't that surprising that he isn't asking directly.