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Sorry, messed this up here. Edited, thx! How are you doing, my friend?

I believe you don't like my writing style in general. Anyway, that's just normal. It's not like every reader will like what I write. Thanks for trying out my novels, and will try to put the points you mentioned in my mind when writing new novels. Have a nice day.

No Yuri bro

I translated the reply at google, so I hope I get what you said right. For the first part, the summing things up will make it more concrete, but it will also turn it into short story version instead of a novel, not truly my style of writing. However I'll try to find a middle ground, one that I'll shorten the descriptions a bit, make it for 2 chapters instead of 5. I write using a certain way of 5 chapter block technique, it's like every 5 chapters will have a certain small arc of events special to them, with exception of epic battles or events that can span over more than that. But as you-readers- can deduct things, I can try to sum few things here and there. As for the second part, it's just done at the beginning chapters of the novel-first 150 to be exact- then things will develop nicer with much fewer new character popping here and there like the beginning.

Hi hi! First of all, I wasn't and am not offended by such opinion. In fact, I'm appreciating it, highly valuing such readers like you, who place their opinions with good explanations that truly helps me to evolve as a writer. I don't stick to my writing style, for 15 years I'm trying my best to learn and hone my writing skills. I know I'm not the best writer in the world, and that's why I'm very open to any good comments that can help me truly evolve and learn new stuff that I lack. I don't know why I never had a notification about your reply, but glad I came by it even if it was 7 months late :D You got good points indeed, but I'm not a humour writer. Yet when I read it the way you suggested above, it truly works better. So I'll take your opinions and suggestions into consideration when editing the novel again. Even if it'll take few months to happen, but it will happen. Thanks for such good comment again, I learnt something from you, even if it's 7 months later. Have a nice day and thanks for sharing your valuable opinion with me. Hopefully one day we'll meet on one of my novels, where you'll like the new writing style of mine.

I'm truly honoured to meet a reader like you who appreciates the effort and thought I placed in my novel <3 I'm trying my best to come up with hard to expect or predict arcs and events. After all, I always get bored if I can deduct the upcoming events of any novel I read. And I love my readers to experience ups and downs in events, all out of their expectations and guesses. I like the surprises you had when reading my novel, and I hope such feeling will keep going on for the rest of my novel. Waiting to hear your opinion when the first part ends and the second part starts :D

Thanks a lot for supporting my novel, truly appreciated ❤🔥

Thanks a lot for supporting my novel, truly appreciated ❤🔥

Thanks a lot for supporting my novel, truly appreciated ❤🔥

Thanks a lot for supporting my novel, truly appreciated ❤🔥