JhiThan_Ser
I like novels and I write one.
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Yes, it sounds like boasting but the world-building here is quite deep. But, I wouldn't try to info dump it in one chapter or new details to remember every chapter. You can ignore the world for now since you'll eventually get used to it on the way. But it's better to show it in the writing rather than here in the comment. TL;DR Enjoy the novel, thank you very much for the honest and constructive review! :)
love that series... don't mind my comment, just saying
and disturbing... fixed it, thanks for pointing it out.
Well, you can ask some queries. If I don't answer, it may be because the answer will be a spoiler. But sometimes, it may be because I skipped over something. It's also good for me since I will be aware of what the readers are generally keeping track of in the story.
who can person... lol. Sorry, been busy today and the latest chapters were rushed at the last minute. Thank you for pointing out my mistakes.
It's I-Ye-Sa
I'm surprised that only one had noticed this or maybe the others just didn't point it out.
I don't know what to say, all of the answers are spoilers... sorry.
i-ye-sa
iesa, and thank you for pointing out mistakes, I'll check and correct them all later when it's worktime :)
PS, next time, things will be explained more clearly. :) Please continue to criticize to help the author improve, thank you.