Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Noble gesture, however quite pathetic considering Eli has zero chance of impressing the girl. He is the ever reclusive nerd who sits at the back and keeps a low profile.
Was their name revealed? I dont recall it being mentioned and seriously it does fit in with the cultivation vibe going on. Maybe something along the lines of mystic golem etc would fit.
..nodded his head in understanding.. it’s not intelligent so why approve?
Guess he wants to show off and now is annoyed he will look inferior. Ego needs a good beating.
Seems the sentence is unfinished here.
I don’t know, but this mumbling is becoming annoying. Not liking it
..tell me what…
Mumbling? Going to get a reputation as nutter the way he doesn’t think his words within
Excitable little fellow isnt he..
Such a petulant child. Just because he was trash and now has this opportunity, he takes this attitude. I don’t belive this Zoe girl has tormented him in anyway. Seriously, research when he leaves the place. Shallow thinking MC
This paragraph and the previous one contradict each other. First paragraph says tester was a woman, 2nd paragraph then says him?
This is just dragging on.. a bit of a back story is good, but an ocean of a story is going to be painful to endure.
Great few chapters I read now. Alternative history genre is a favourite of mine and so far I am liking it all. I have forgotten but what is the age of the actress Taylor here? I don’t recall. Regardless I have to await a few more days to store some chapters up now. Thanks for your work 👍
Sounds fairly wrong here.. The MC and pet are critically injured ??
Across what ?
Ouch,. Racism again..
He has terrible stats, weighted towards the strength is everything mindset.
Wow!! rascist much.