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AstralSage4mthCommenténo point in pleasing the readers if you end up loosing your drive to continue writing the story and drop it. so I say GO! GO! GO!
I just wanted to clear up those points. I totally get it if some of you aren't thrilled with these choices, but that's the direction I'm taking this story. I'm really excited to see how it all unfolds and I hope you are too! Thanks for sticking with the story and sharing your thoughts – it means a lot.- AstralSage1yrCommenté
I have a few ideas for the sect name .... 1) Because Hansen has rebirth and soul spells and zhu zuqing' spirit is a nether cat so probably an underworld themed sect name like Yama, Hallows, Reaper etc 2) Going with the Chinese theme of naming sects after heavenly phenomenon and spiritual beasts like Heavenly (tian) Or earthly and then adding animals like dragon, turtle (zhu), tiger, phoenix. ofcourse use a Chinese equivalent of the name using Google translator like in the bracket. then it may look something like Zhutian meaning Heavenly Turtle or something.
Ch 44 FIDELIUS !!! - AstralSage1yrCommenté
I like what you shared and couldn't agree more with your perspective. Definitely didn't see this coming. Thanks for putting it here.
Ch 1 Eleven Things about Beautiful Women Every Man Must KnowdetailHow Women Want It! The How, What, Where, When and Why Behind Women ActLivres et littérature · CUTE_KINGDOM - AstralSage1yrRépondu à WylltCh 6 Ch 06 - Mindscape (2/2)
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I want to attempt a story focused on the world of Harry Potter, not Harry Potter himself. A self-fulfilling prophecy is at work so the dark lord's defeat is set in stone. Plus I am a fan of GRR Martin so who knows how the events will roll out.
Ch -1 MC PROFILE - ABILITIES & SKILLS - AstralSage1yrCommenté
really love your analogy. It's witty and humurous.
As the last name was called, and Dumbledore said his words, food appeared in front of us all. The rules of engagement were clear on the matter. Every student must eat for themselves; every fork is a weapon, every knife a shield. Kill the enemy that impounds on your food, ravage the plates of your foes if you have none. This is the land of cutthroat food business, where no adult comes by to give you your portion, so you must make your own. - AstralSage1yrCommenté
all the best for your exams
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- AstralSage1yrCommentéCh 11 Alert Spoiler Harem:
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its seems like first hand experience?
On the rabbit knee, I rinse the joint out until it separates from the meat. Basically what I did was push the knee joint in one direction and pull the skin in another. I then held the leg with my fingers until the skin separated from the knee joint and the surrounding flesh. I pull the knee joint up while I pull the skin down, removing most of the skin on one leg. I repeat the same process with the other leg. Beneath the genitals, I ran his hand under the skin and across the abdomen. I loosen the skin of the lower part at the pull of it completely. At the rear of the rabbit, just above the tail, I ran his hand under the fur and along the back. I hold the skin and pull the back part until it completely detaches from the tail. Pull the fur down until it reaches the rabbit's arms. Another pull and the fur is off. - AstralSage1yrRépondu à Oglan
i learnt a new word today. thanks
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Yes, I intentionally want to avoid our MC being batchmates with Harry Potter. That plot is overused and I am writing to improve so I want to write about Potterverse and Hogwarts study years in my own vision. MC will be a batchmate with Charlie Weasly.
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - AstralSage1yrRépondu à _Solomon_
This is my first time writing something. It's a unique opportunity to learn about story writing so even If the story becomes bland because of plot holes I may rewrite parts of the plot but I will finish the book as well as I can. Not sure how long it will take though.
Ch 5 Ch 05 - Mindscape (1/2) - AstralSage1yrRépondu à Tantalon
Yes. it's just his own analysis. I will post this only once. After this time I will only write of his progress in said skills. A complete profile can be found in the Auxillary chapters which will be kept up to date with the progress of the story.
Ch 6 Ch 06 - Mindscape (2/2) - AstralSage1yrCommentéCh 184 I am sorry....again...
- AstralSage1yrRépondu à WaltzWannaWrite
thank you for your kind words. I will try and do justice to my writing. One of the reasons for the slow updates is I have constantly researched information on the net about Britain and their education system. I am born and brought up in India with zero firsthand knowledge of Britain other than from documentaries, travel shows or works of British authors. So I don't want to assume too much and write something which results in a poor reading experience, especially for the natives.
Ch 5 Ch 05 - Mindscape (1/2)