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Na1gel12hCommentélol the clickbait picture of the fanfic is gold .. i bet 60% of your readers only came cuz they saw the picture haha :D , but i do hope you have something with hinata and mc its annoying to get clickbaited with a pic of ex" hinata" and she just get 2 scenes with mc the nothing more xD , well enuff about that im going to try on your story !
Ch 1 Chapter 1: In Konoha; A Late BloomerdetailKonoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara (Not MTL)Anime et bandes dessinées · INeedRest- Na1gel1dPosté
its really meh.... its full of cliches on cliches and not those you can accept lol its those cringe cliches that makes you want to hide under a pillow lol,this is not a " gamer " fanfic like the one your used to in this the gamer system is made by a godess off that world lol so it really shouldn't be that powerfull lol espeachally when that fake trans lucifer can one shot the one who made the gear lol but i digress , its not a system its an ugly gauntlet so now he have 2 gauntlets -_-.. oh and the gamer gauntlet also come with your special delux arch enemy ... so now he have one arch enemy for every gauntlet he have... how fun ! , so yeah its cliches after cliches ugh i personaly dont like it but give it a try iguess ?
- Na1gel1dCommentéCh 59 Talking about it
- Na1gel1dRépondu à Civilized_Monke
dunno, i mean superman can do it , and so far i see the mc vastly superior to superman "not in powers" but in the usage of them
It tasted disgusting. - Na1gel1dRépondu à midgetydeath
cuz author is probably writing half of it with chatt gtp lol xD
Akeno Hagime. - Na1gel1dCommenté
no those are not lacy black panties thats a straight A thong .. know your panties bruh
She was wearing nothing but a pair of lacy black panties and an apron. The ties of the apron cinched her waist, emphasizing the perfect curve of her hips, the taut muscle of her thighs. Her hair was pulled up in a messy bun, exposing the graceful line of her neck. - Na1gel2dCommenté
this is one of the most stupid lines in all cultivation novels when 2 people fight ... dont doge if you have the guts... should he be like yeah sure il stand still and let you hit me ?
"Brat, don't dodge if you have the guts!" Chen Mo's vulgarities angered the gloomy man so much that his face turned green. Chen Mo ignored him. Instead, he immersed his consciousness in his mind. The cultivation method of the Mysterious Thunder Palm, one move after another, was like a little person practicing in his mind. - Na1gel2dCommenté
yes, but dump hermonie she is boring
Wait a minute. But right then, Ron had a massive realization. Am I a cheater, too? - Na1gel2dCommentéDae Ho raised an eyebrow, his grip loosening slightly but still holding her in place. 'Is she for real? Was this really just naive curiosity?' He raised his brows but pressed on her with a serious expression. "So you thought it was okay to sneak in here and take a photo while I was asleep? That's not just curiosity, Noona. That's creepy behavior. Imagine if it were me doing this to you? I'm sure I'd be in jail the next day."
- Na1gel2dCommentéShe used her quick legs to dash towards the door, even leaving her clothes behind. But just as she took two steps, she felt herself falling as her body was tackled to the ground.
- Na1gel2dCommentéIn a world filled with pink clouds, three figures floated on a cloud suspended in midair. One man and two women lay entwined in the soft, misty embrace, their naked bodies relaxed and at ease.
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lol this gave it all a horror movie edge to it lol
Dae Ho's eyes were open in the photo, looking straight at the camera. - Na1gel2dCommenté'How did it twitch? Is it alive?' she thought idiotically, but quickly dismissed that idea.
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what is he doing here.... lol did her iq fall because of the situation or is she just stupid in this one :'D
'What is he doing here? I thought he was still outside playing with Gobong,' she wondered, her cheeks flushing with a mix of embarrassment and confusion. She knew she should leave immediately, but her feet seemed rooted to the spot. - Na1gel3dRépondu à Ateeb_Ahmed_6204
well, my dibs escalated i see ..
Photo >detail[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed BloodAnime et bandes dessinées · MaliciousPrince - Na1gel3dCommenté
is that gojos blue ? =)
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