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Thanks for catching the mistake! Can’t believe I missed it. 😅
It was a really good chapter too. I’m excited to see what happens next Eve.
Congratulations on 1000 chapters! I’m proud of you. ☺️
No he hasn’t and it’s quite annoying tbh
Where’s the using the system to make the new place into a guild house? Personally, I’d like to see the system used a bit more frequently. A lot of the times it feels forgotten or an afterthought for convenience rather than an integral part of the world changing and becoming more active with the world dragon restarting the system in everyone. He’s now in a continent where there are system features active that even he doesn’t have (the guild system for example) and yet we barely see it used or commented on. The story is great, don’t get me wrong, but I’d love to have seen some more of just interaction between the system and real world. Like designating the building as the guild house and talking about it being set as the portal point. Also, this is the dark light host guild, so does that make Lassim special as a war champion for the first branch in the entire continent being represented? Is there something special that could happen because of it? Then, does the rest of his team also become members? There’s just a lot to explore that I think would be cool for a chapter or two to just make the system more integral to the story that I feel is being missed out on. Especially if you’re trying to make this location more permanent. I mean, not be a Debby downer but we JUST recently have gone through literally 3 separate “move in”s in recent chapters. 1st at the tower in the religious city capital, then war broke out and he moved in to the 2nd the Royal palace which then a war broke out and he was forced to move, 3rd to the inn but now the barracks immediately following a small war breaking out. I’m vastly simplifying and reducing it down to simple ideas of course but You’ve sort of repeated this exact storyline three times in a row. I’m trying to forgive it since I like this story a lot but making a change to make this house permanent using the system would let you not repeat the whole moving thing again tbh. I’d rather see you move on to other plot lines. Even having an apprentice again sort of makes me roll my eyes because we quite literally JUST did that with the blue dragons. If you’re struggling for ideas, maybe taking a break and dropping down from 3 chapters back to 2 would be good. I’d hate to see the plot fall apart because you’re just repeating the same stuff repeatedly.
PoE!? Yoooo author-San, you playing PoE2? 👀
The series of explanations helped me visualize the attack A LOT better than that previous one you had done in that other chapter. Thanks eve.
3 chapters. Nice
Cara’s dialogue is missing.
I think I’m really struggling to visualize what his attack is like. This “super” kick. The descriptions have been mostly alright to follow but for some reason this latest “no holding back” attack just doesn’t seem to make sense in my mind for how to visualize what’s happening. 😖