SURPASSEDEMPEROR

well i used wrong words... but why the interplay between the two... maah felt very dramatic

this comment feels logical but also feels forced don't know why

why the monologue 😶

man what is happening here?? sometimes it is 3 sometimes 2 and half sometimes 3 month and now 1.5 years...???

again,,,, is this a translation??

why does this feel more and more chinese

it was burn the world down as the name few pages prior

this was very exciting, unfortunately iIthink I am under curse the moment i started enjoying this the author went on hiatus, and same goes for your other novel, where it came crashing down and you stopped updating (you did the right thing, it felt like a toxic relationship, i open the book for a exciting read, then be confused with all those POV, slow progress of story, lots of open ends, no closure for any arc, and the MC's rampant mood swing) It's great that you stopped with that.... you had nice mc at the start and middle but then... though I guess for a beginner you were awesome..

well i agree with that as well, that was illogical

this is pov storytelling of DC comics with an OC OP, just to tweak around certain things, not an SI