would love to read more. great so far keepsmyou riveted to the story

great story so far cant wait for more chapters. the story is great, and the background makes it more enjoyable, and i like that it is not rushed to get to the main story. i like how he is unique, not a wearwolf or vampire

the story was going well until the part where he died , and it just became terrible. The time with freya and Dahlia wasn't great, but it was understandable, but the Rebecca part after just destroyed the story for me. i saw no reason of having it there if nothing was going to change except make the mc arrogant and stupid. to the writer, good luck. i know everyone has different tastes. im sure you will have people who will enjoy it.

Rebecca

thanks for the chapter can't wait for more.

great story cant wait for more chapters really enjoying how the mc has to work for his desires not just given them. thanks for writing this fan fiction

love this story it is amazing hope there is more the whole background for harry and where he has been and what he has done one of the best i have read thank you for writing it

gotta love the attitude when it comes to weapons and family

+1

can't wait for more

cant wait for more must say this is an amazing story so far really cant wait for more. please tell me you not stopping here

option 2

this one definitely

C new race sounds more interesting. cant wait for more chapters

i would prefer this one carried on then a new one really liked where this was going

thanks for the chapter. interested in seeing where the story goes

great story so far please keep it up thanks

thanks for the chapter hope there is more as i see you started a new one

really enjoying this story thanks for writing hopefully you arent dropping it

really enjoying this fanfiction please keep it up. fight scene was interesting in its own way