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Twilight : Dawn

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What is Twilight : Dawn

Lisez le roman Twilight : Dawn écrit par l'auteur Pokemaster5632 publié sur WebNovel. After dying to save a girl Damian was offered the chance to reincarnate in a world of his choosing with wishes. Now finally free to be able to live the life of his choosing, nothing will stand in the ...

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After dying to save a girl Damian was offered the chance to reincarnate in a world of his choosing with wishes. Now finally free to be able to live the life of his choosing, nothing will stand in the way of Damian and his dreams. This is an mc x Rosalie fan fiction. Emmet will be paired with another OC.This is a wish fulfillment story. MC will become OP very fast. English is not my first language but I will try my best to publish quality works. Please review and give your opinion on how I can improve my story. I’m a fairly new writer so I’ll be relying on your opinions. Creative Criticism is encouraged.

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creepycatisawesone
creepycatisawesoneLv3creepycatisawesone

Hey man I would love to read ur novel but... your past record shows That you dropped your previous novel at 10 chapters so I hope u can kinda promise me to not drop it too early so that I can assuredly Read. Trust me , I am pretty sure others also have this doubt Pinky promise me

Angelica_Odlbergui
Angelica_OdlberguiLv3Angelica_Odlbergui

well there is a novel that i am almost sure you copied some parts of, without judging i like this development, but try not to use the other novel so much in the future

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Sorry but I can’t give you with good conscience a good note for copying another author story (He wrote it better by the way). If you want to write, write something on your own.

HiraiYuki
HiraiYukiLv14HiraiYuki

I have recently started reading your novel and fallen in love with it, hope you continue to update!!! I would love it more if you updated everyday!!!

Just_for_fun1997
Just_for_fun1997Lv13Just_for_fun1997

I read a work which was really similar to yours but reading the new chapter it seems you are taking it in a new direction atleast so try not to copy the other work too much okay.

AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv14AbandonedToGodhood

Unlike the other ones the plot is descent and is going with the flow. I hope the author does not drop this fan-fic cause I like it..........

PrimorDious
PrimorDiousLv4PrimorDious

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please don't drop it. Its so hard to find a Twilight fanfic nowadays, and yours is so good. I'll be very grateful if you won't drop it.

Manuekmgc
ManuekmgcLv4Manuekmgc

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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14GAMING_IS_MUST

all the character interactions and story line is a copy of novel by Roh594 reincarnated in Twilight. Do your own hard work copying from others is despicable

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

Everything is 5-Stars except World Background, which is 4-Stars because there were one or two minor mistakes, that honestly doesn't matter, but I am honest with my review, so there's that. The first chapter is a bit confusing with the way the author writes it but chapter 2 goes straight to 5-Stars. If you get through chapter 1 then all the doors are open to you.

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

I like this fanfic, but updates are getting slower, I'm worried that it'll get dropped. I hope not. Also - Please stop nerfing the MC.. MC has the ability, skill creation with seemingly no limits. I just don't understand why he hasn't made skills like, time rewind, matter manipulation, or reality alteration. Hell, even basic abilities like super strength, super speed and invulnerablility would make him strongest in the world. So why did he just choose to remain a hybrid like Klaus in the world of Twilight.!? Isn't it just nerfing the MC.?? Vampires in Twilight are stronger than in Vampire diaries

shahara22
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Emma_Scheele_7937
Emma_Scheele_7937Lv1Emma_Scheele_7937

Please update....<-ignore everything after that it said I had to hove 140 characters.. Sunpak oven Ozark is who beep pick keep oh so do DM Irenerock Ben pizza whisk Lando oddly ornithology isn't

Dylan_Carman
Dylan_CarmanLv2Dylan_Carman

very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Nyamsu_87
Nyamsu_87Lv2Nyamsu_87

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Zeroren
ZerorenLv3Zeroren

Now lets get this off first the author copied part of another novel BUT the other novel is basically dead so that story is up for gain honestly, 2 this novel is FAR better written good lord the other novel feels mtl'ed 3 there is difference in abilities the main character get some similar but through different means. Writing, Story and Character is 4/5, while World background and updates are 2/5 for world you can't really do much with it due to the setting and as far as updates go it could be alot better.

PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv13PinnacleExistence

it's like the story is a target, and the author throws darts at it.. with no context, no development whatsoever.. it's straight up brain death.. in the fourth chapter mc had already kissed Rosalie and asked to be her boyfriend.. and that's also in the first 10 pages of the chapter.. that doesn't make any sense.. there's also the bullshit that was thrown, like, he was popular in high school, and was very social.. but at the first time that he met Rosalie, he started to stutter and got paralyzed by pure dumb love, like someone would be childish like that, mainly with 6 other vampires by the side..

MrYamcha
MrYamchaLv4MrYamcha

Guys it’s a system novel and he’s already op *sigh*🤦🏾‍♂️.

Azazel_69
Azazel_69Lv3Azazel_69

Great read a little bit fast paced but still good so please do not drop. .

Blur182
Blur182Lv3Blur182

I am writing this review just cos according to others, this author tend to drop. So I am writing a review so he realise that some ppl really enjoyed this fanfic and also bcoz he got hooked me hooked with sugar within 7 chap. so in conclusion, Writing Quality-4.5/5 Its quite good so far with a few mistake here and there, that will not impact the story. Story Development-not enough chap for me to form an opinion BUT sugar.... Character Design-5/5 I mean there is only 1 oc soooo yeah...... his design is cool tho, but so out of place in a Twilight world(Its like one of those spot the mc meme) Updating Stability-5/5 Judging from past update, very consistent so far. World Background-can't conclude. Pls man dont drop this

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