so is this a wemby fanfic or something lol. him and chet suddenly pop up in my mind after seeng the height and wing span

did you cut out all the reaction parts? is that why the chapters are so short now? can I ask why?

that explains a lot. not bashing or anything, if you want to increase ghe quality of this novel just change up the dialogues, just paraphrase it to make them seem more natural. Cause the option that your'reusing for chatgpt seems uptight or too formal

i think people like me for example, are just stockpiling chapters instead of reading everyday especially during tense moments. you want to read that completely on one sitting

is the 25 chapter on patreon a monthly thing or you just have that as a back fill? then also has the same release sched as webnovel?

at least make the conversation not too formal it feels so cringy reading those text and thinking that they are talking like that. everything else is good. i like the idea of the story

are you using chat gpt to write this?

Is the supernatural going to be Gate? that would be awesome

This is a fanfic of mercenary enrollment, right?

was this dropped on the patreon page?

Hey at least the translated chapters are not in that weird shakespearsan language now. keep up the good work TL san

can it got back to the casual wordings? this overly formal words doesn't feel like I'm reading the same thing previously lol

did you change a writing/translation software?

yeah, just try to not look into conments of finished works too much. People that rereads this are too much of a comment spammer that they almost tell the whole story by the comments.

ironmouse

great work on this author! really enjoyed a overpowered OG mc. just a suggestion if don't have an idea how to progress. You can create chapters dedicated to seeing reactions of players or NPC those are good reads as well and it will broaden the worldview of your writing

can't vote your book...

reading all the chapters available.. i can now come to the conclusion that this is in fact AI made.. dropping here good luck un your work author

is this made using ai?

wouldn't the enemy be able to discern the tactic? he used it on T.O morrow if he used it again he could be tracked?