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Stole my thoughts long before I could ever have them.
You tell him, Bebe! Goth =/= psycho. It's only 'implied'. Don't propagate negative stereotypes!
Am I the only one who had a pervy thought about what to make more delicious by framing it in bread slices!?
And when you're done working and collect enough points... you can use them to get products from our store ... for free! "Uh... you pay me with the points though..." "For FREEEEEE!" "I wanna quit and go home!" "Sorry... No can do! Work hard for your free rewards! :D"
I'm too lazy to be detailed but it's a good story so far. The gist of it seems to be a fantasy adventure with a touch of comedy. The one thing that stands out is the 'system. It's a great deal more credible as to the hows and whys of its existence from the get go. I like it when the OP and meta elements actually make sense.
Is this... Is this magical MSG!?
Where...Chocobo....wat!? lol
Dovakin!, Dovakin...lalala la lala.
Chosen to be waifu one... and along comes plot armor to enforce the possibility.
Uh... It's Sammy.
More like an impression of him. It was real enough to 'be' but weakly connected to his independent will and soul.
They came, they saw, they played in the water park.
Pretty much.
Not every river has a lake. And sometimes, when there's no rain, a river can dry up until it does rain again... especially if it doesn't have a lake.