Writing Quality: 4.5 out of 5There's a lot to improve with the Writing Quality, nonetheless impressive work so far.Story Development: 4.5 out of 5Same here.Character Design: 4.5 out of 5Same here too.Updating Stability: 4.5 out of 5I want more chapters, of course.World Background: 4.5 out of 5Give it more background.

For the reason alone that Tom from Tom and Jerry is here, I would rate as the best of the best. if Jerry here as well, I will worship the book and would likely write a five page essay about it's structure!

To make their presence prominent, a bank relies on reputation and the trust of the people. Their lifeline is the wealth accumulated by Wizards so it's a show of power. it's also a plus since every Goblin Rebellion, they were defeated by Wizards.

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Great idea and concept. As of the recent chapter, the author executed the story excellently thus far, we will see if it follows through.

Typically I won't search specifically for a story but here I am. It's promising a bright future and I would like to accompany the story to it's eventual end.

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Happy New Years to everyone! For my first review of the year, I would like to give this honor to this novel. It had intrigued me completely and mashed out a lot of fantastic ideas for circumstances specifically for writing. Cheers!

Decent, neither a good nor a bad read. It is exactly what you want to read when you are listening to music or just plainly relaxing on a corner.

Yes, it is the wisdom of the old 🤔

Fellow Daoist. Let me answer that question, if you patrol every day you will have less chance of survival, a month's difference is a lot especially if you are a cultivator who dabbles in this kind of profession, it means you have a lot of preparation, Alchemist can make poisons and healing pills meanwhile Blacksmiths can forge armor and weapons. Ngl, it makes sense that they restrict Alchemist and Blacksmiths to not participate too much in battle as they have value alive rather than dead, also they will definitely have more protection from other cultivators inside the sect due to their profession.

The actual best Novel I've read in months, if this is not picked I will be going on in a strike for a month.

Amazing review, I am your 69th like. Thank you so much!

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It's understandable, I think you did not understand it clearly due to it having no comma 🤔

According to my understanding and as you know, Newton published the book called "Philosophiae Naturalis Principia Mathematica" that discusses various law of physics for example the law of motion and the law of universal gravitation. Which this world defy and is unusable to be applied on, also Newton's pursuit of knowledge is taken into consideration, for he would definitely die in peace on such a mystical world filled with wonders that he could never explore in our mundane world. "Science is the only truth" as they say.

In an overview, the novel itself seems to be another one of those repetitive and cliche types. When you look further into the story, you will see that it has unique elements that make the story enjoyable. Some could say that the story heavily leans on the reader's perspective in terms of putting meaning on the level. There are alive characters here with their own emotions and feeling on which they act.

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I hope you get better 🤗

I expect a lot from this novel, and I hope that the author would be willing to listen to his most loyal reader's suggestions. I still have not read the novel yet, but I would soon though I already read a lot of the author's other works, and I can say with the most definite answer that they are good at writing, so I would like to give the benefits of the doubt and rate it five stars.