Writing Quality: 4.5 out of 5There's a lot to improve with the Writing Quality, nonetheless impressive work so far.Story Development: 4.5 out of 5Same here.Character Design: 4.5 out of 5Same here too.Updating Stability: 4.5 out of 5I want more chapters, of course.World Background: 4.5 out of 5Give it more background.
Emberlight
Aimé par 1 personnes
COMME