Shameless author here. Trying to see if I have a knack for writing. Do let me know in the review if I should continue the story or not. I have incorporated the few elements of fanfiction that I like over the years, hopefully it resonates with some of you out there.

I added a couple more just now

Excellent story development, character building, and world background. However, I think the author needs to hire an editor or two. Otherwise, this is an excellent kingdom building story in a sort of progression genre.