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We Summon You : One Last Time

Auteur: Deep_Diver
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Lisez le roman We Summon You : One Last Time écrit par l'auteur Deep_Diver publié sur WebNovel. "Hey...hey! Get up!" A teen called out to a boy sleeping peacefully on the bed. The boy moaned in answer, "Let me sleep in for 5 more minutes please."ThudHe was kicked out of the bed and he looked up ...

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"Hey...hey! Get up!" A teen called out to a boy sleeping peacefully on the bed. The boy moaned in answer, "Let me sleep in for 5 more minutes please." Thud He was kicked out of the bed and he looked up in anger, "What the-" "Look above." A nerd like guy told the boy, who looked above and was immediately stunned. "......" The boy went silent with shock, along with the six others who were in front of him. What was this place!?!? ------------------------------ Seven teenagers were dragged out of their normal lives and pulled into a whole new world. All it took was one bright flash, and the next moment, everything had disappeared. With no one to help or guide them, and countless questions flooding their mind, how will they survive in this doomed world? Leo, Sai, Ian, Clint, Reeva, Aiko and Erina are striving to live in this twisted world, only hoping that they'll be able to go back home one day. ----------------------- "Hey, what's your name?" Reeva shouted out to the blue-haired girl who was still fiddling with the little mushroom. "Oh, me? I am Erina!" She answered sweetly and plucked the mushroom in front of her. MUNCH! And there she was, inside a canine toothed man eating plant's mouth, covered in drool. "....."

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Deep_Diver
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Hey there! This is my second novel with fantasy and magic as the main theme. Tell me, what would you do if you were suddenly teleported to another world along with a few other, for some reason and you didn't know why you were summoned. Well, if you want to know what happens to seven random teens who meet that situation then you might like my novel. So, please give it a shot. And I know what you are thinking : Reader: Did this author just write himself a review? LMAO! Author: Yeah, but I got to support myself and that's the reason behind the rating. Hope you guys like the novel and if you do please leave a comment or a review.

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TL;DR First city should have been way longer than it actually was. Some parts feel slightly glossed over when should have been fleshed out. Character "importance" between the SEVEN seem very blatant at least at where I am. Stability is fine, but world building feels lacking. Grammar has hiccups but is fine compared to some novels. The novel is worth a try but needs some umph. Review It feels a little wrong to give this story a review this early into its start but I felt it needed one. As this story has just started out I can say that the writing quality is adequate, not perfect, but good enough that I'm not banging my head because of extreme mistakes. I gave updates a 3 as it just started so there's no telling how long the author will stick to the schedule but so far they have kept it well. Development is good. This novel is not rushing itself which I like. The pacing is not bad although some parts feel skimmed over. I would have liked to see more of the first city along with some interactions with the residence. It felt slightly rushed with how fast they dipped out of that area to head to the academy. Character design... honestly I am not particularly happy with it. With the author having seven important characters it's important to make sure we see that they're all important. Right now though I can say that only Leo, Clint, and Erina are memorable at all. The only reason I even remember Sai is because I rather like the name and he gets dialogue. The other characters (especially the other girls) feel like side characters to Leo. I understand he is supposed to be the leader and the novel has just started but it's hard to see the other characters when all but a few even have an opinion. If I could change one thing I would have had asked if you could give more time in the city to really get to know the characters as they interact with the world around them rather than react. The dialogue.... is really telling about who the author seems to care about right now. In some areas it feels like the characters have a voice of their own (good) in others it feels like generic person A voice. World background uhh as I said before the first city should have been where they interacted and figured out about the world. Nothing about the simple explanation made the world stand out much at all. As I haven't gotten to the Academy part of the story I hope that the world gets fleshed out more. Thanks for the novel. I am being critical but the fact is your novel is definitely not bad and deserves more exposure.

eton
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i see this story different from the usual stories i already read here at webnovel.. i hope the author continues the story with more exciting plots..

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