Villain's Upsurge

The Synopsis was very well written but a bit too long, though it made it an easy choice for me to read the novel. The characters and world building is very good. when reading you can understand that this is not your first work since the overall writing quality is great. A good novel as for now. hopefully more chapters will be released

Dear author, I must commend you for the effort and creativity you put into crafting this intense and thought-provoking novel. Your portrayal of Leon's journey from a ruthless assassin to a conflicted artist seeking the perfect death was captivating and left a lasting impact on me. I particularly appreciate the way you explored the concept of beauty in death and how Leon's obsession with it ultimately led to his downfall. Your use of language was also impressive, as you were able to create a vivid picture of the world and characters within it. That said, I believe there are areas where you could improve the story. For instance, while Leon's descent into madness was intriguing, it would have been even more engaging if you had provided more backstory to flesh out his character and motives. Additionally, some of the events leading up to his final act of betrayal could have been better explained and developed to make the story more cohesive. Good Luck 👍

I'm not really good at giving feedback but i can tell that this is a good novel and the background setting is also good though the synopsis is long but its still good so keep it up author-nim I'll support you.. 😁

This is so cool! Even though I commented before of how I like how the MC is cool but he's a bit overbearing but I'm sure that with the characters that surround the Mc. The personality won't be as merciless. I will def continue reading. ps: I like Luna.

I really liked how you've put up the synopsis. Very interesting plot. Also liked the way you've described the character. Keep up the good work.

Nice so far. Introduction was strong with a gripping event, a little crazy mc and good writing style. Looking forward to seeing this villain at work. Good job author!

This is so awesome, great novel, it's really thought provoking. GREAT story line and character development. I really like overbearing characters showing them that he's the boss

I'm really loving this! usually I would try to avoid reading novels told from 1st person perspectives but this one is an exception, the MC is just so cool. Loving it so far.

The first chapter made me dumbstruck like why did you do that? You are the heros? What happened etc... But reading more I realised his life was so miserable and pitifully. The boy had so much on his sleeves. It is difficult to put this book down. The emotions that Leon through are heart-wrenching and the story start with a beautiful note 'Art'. This is a book that everyone should read. Keep it up !

Hello Author! Your plot is freakingly good and I love the fact how you described the MC. Happy to encounter an amazing plot with good pace. Great work mate! Keep it up!

This story is unique and different from the stories I had read till now. Loved it. Keep it up

This story is good and i do wish for more chapters. I cant relate to the main character at all but that is what makes it fun. His sense of longing for normal human emotions which he himself says to him that he doesn't have . He is unique but not completely chaotic at the same time. I wish you luck.

This story is very interesting, I read the first chapter and was immediately served by the very cool MC. This is going to be a list of novels I want to read soon.

I'm at chapter 6 and so far I'm liking this character. Weirdly enough, he's somewhat relatable... I don't relate to the first part though because it was simply... eye-opening. At the very least, I look forward to more chapters. This is certainly a good read, and the grammar is consistent as well.

That's a nice story here! I really liked and I'll be adding into my Library to follow up. If you enjoy some Killula-style-like MC, then this is for you. Point to improve: The grammar at the start was really amazing, but after jumped to the First POV, it held some issues, I would suggest a rewrite here. All in all, keep the good work

Wow. I was instantly gripped by the synopsis of this novel, just like Leon in the novel was. The plot is amazing, something new on my reading list; the writing quality adds to it, and so do the characters that enrich the novel.

Great story, the beautiful attention to detail on the plot and character design is amazing. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see where this adventure brings us.

Am really not best in giving reviews but the chapter one really got me hooked..The MC might be really annoying at times but it's understandable. More inspirations and expecting more

I read the first chapter and I loved it. My favorite part was the ending quote. Although it's only the first chapter I am already in love with leon. Also your writing quality is great. I will definitely add this to my reading list.

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