The Synopsis was very well written but a bit too long, though it made it an easy choice for me to read the novel. The characters and world building is very good. when reading you can understand that this is not your first work since the overall writing quality is great. A good novel as for now. hopefully more chapters will be released

Dear author, I must commend you for the effort and creativity you put into crafting this intense and thought-provoking novel. Your portrayal of Leon's journey from a ruthless assassin to a conflicted artist seeking the perfect death was captivating and left a lasting impact on me. I particularly appreciate the way you explored the concept of beauty in death and how Leon's obsession with it ultimately led to his downfall. Your use of language was also impressive, as you were able to create a vivid picture of the world and characters within it. That said, I believe there are areas where you could improve the story. For instance, while Leon's descent into madness was intriguing, it would have been even more engaging if you had provided more backstory to flesh out his character and motives. Additionally, some of the events leading up to his final act of betrayal could have been better explained and developed to make the story more cohesive. Good Luck 👍

I'm not really good at giving feedback but i can tell that this is a good novel and the background setting is also good though the synopsis is long but its still good so keep it up author-nim I'll support you.. 😁

This is so cool! Even though I commented before of how I like how the MC is cool but he's a bit overbearing but I'm sure that with the characters that surround the Mc. The personality won't be as merciless. I will def continue reading. ps: I like Luna.

I really liked how you've put up the synopsis. Very interesting plot. Also liked the way you've described the character. Keep up the good work.

Nice so far. Introduction was strong with a gripping event, a little crazy mc and good writing style. Looking forward to seeing this villain at work. Good job author!

This is so awesome, great novel, it's really thought provoking. GREAT story line and character development. I really like overbearing characters showing them that he's the boss

I'm really loving this! usually I would try to avoid reading novels told from 1st person perspectives but this one is an exception, the MC is just so cool. Loving it so far.

The first chapter made me dumbstruck like why did you do that? You are the heros? What happened etc... But reading more I realised his life was so miserable and pitifully. The boy had so much on his sleeves. It is difficult to put this book down. The emotions that Leon through are heart-wrenching and the story start with a beautiful note 'Art'. This is a book that everyone should read. Keep it up !

Hello Author! Your plot is freakingly good and I love the fact how you described the MC. Happy to encounter an amazing plot with good pace. Great work mate! Keep it up!