The Tale Of The Worst One

The feel of the story has a way, the four kingdom feels very avatar like but let's take it as a general idea. The story progresses in a much more historic approach and I think it's nice for a story based on fantasy. Overall very nice piece of work a solid 5. Let's see what it holds for the future.

I read the prologue, i can tell you put some thought and effort into it, but the quality is a bit lacking, i can notice some repetitive phrases and places where there should be a comma but there isnt. There was quite some world-building which i think will be used in the future of the work. The mc is a bit bland, revenge driven, but that isn’t any issue. You just have to make him feel real and everyone will grow to like him. Overall i think this work will go to good places!!

from the look of the book I believe it is going to be interesting that is why I gave it 5 stars. I don't have anything to say anymore so💖💖💖💖💖💖

A very fast pace story, with all the necessary info to understand what is happening... Just wish that their was more details in the story. Plus after dealing with some grammatical errors, the story would be amazing, as it is very propelling... Thanks for the read!

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The story is interesting and engaging. This is a fast paced work. Initial chapters are filled with necessary background details. There were certain grammatical errors but not enough to take away the interest from the plot. Author, please update soon, I want to read more!

okay, so far I think the plot is great but could be better, I enjoyed it obviously but something just felt missing, can't put my finger on it.

I really like where this novel is heading at and the romance which would be coming at the future also excites me. You have my full support, I will follow you novel till the end

I like how Alex is motivated to become king. It shows the character's strong determination to achieve what he wants. This story partly reminds me of ATLA. There are a few missed punctuations and repeated words, but I'm sure that it'll be great as the story unfolds. ✨

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There are quite a bit of repetition and run on sentences. I think there could be more of a hook to pull me into the story. Overall this is a really good story. Expecting this story to become a hit soon! Keep going, you got this <3!

This is a bit of a classic hero's journey set in the author's fantasy world, in short. Overall, an enjoyable read and good story beats; if you like a fast pace this is for you (at least if it keeps going the same way in future chapters). The writing style take a bit of getting used to with the long sentence form, and everything is very spelled out for the reader, probably making for a casual read above all else. There are mistakes in grammar and typesetting, but in just four chapters the writing seems to have improved quite a bit, making me hopeful for future chapters.

Wow this book is cool but there are some few grammatical error still yet the book is simple and cool to understand ............................. ....

Really good read, there is only one area of concern for me, but that is personal preference and doesn’t affect the quality of the story. I wish the author luck and good fortune on their journey of writing.

it's really captivating how the author has described everything .it seems so vivid and the plot is also mysterious and exciting . hope to read it more!

A very intriguing and suspenseful story which has me hoping for more! I found it quite entertaining despite how short each chapter. Keep up the good work author!

hello, a friendly reader here. The author has put some thought into the world setting. On the surface it looks simple while the intricacies are complex. I liked the smooth flow of dialogues too. I would love to come back to the story once there are enough chapters. good luck to the author with his future direction.

Plot wise, it's very interesting seeing how the author is working on story building. However, the descriptions of the world, like colors, smells, and just how awe-inspiring the magic appears to (glowing spheres of mana or ethereal neon lights) is missing for me

Author has a very vivid imagination. I always liked stories about the four elemental powers, fire, water, earth and air. Minor edits are needed in some area but does affect overall story. I looked forward to more chapters. Keep it up author.