Item: The Tale Of The Worst One
Rating: 3.4

Christian_MojicaLv142yr

2022-08-30 10:24

Plot wise, it's very interesting seeing how the author is working on story building. However, the descriptions of the world, like colors, smells, and just how awe-inspiring the magic appears to (glowing spheres of mana or ethereal neon lights) is missing for me

The Tale Of The Worst One

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Sandipan_Dutta_7440Author

Thank you and the missing things will come

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