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The Scourge of Altasia

Altasia is a huge plane in the universe where many species coexist. Nobody knows the true size of Altasia. A universal system came into existence and the race to choose the Monarch of Altasia started. Many members of different species like Demon, Dragons, Elves, Angles, Giants, etc. Start fighting to get to the throne of Monarch. 7 overlords needed to be selected for the final war to select the Monarch. To select these overlords cycles of world war started to happen one after another 24 times already. 6/7 of these overlord positions are already filled. It's time for the 25th cycle. Everyone is desperate to get the last seat of the overlord for themselves. Alliance form and break every few years. People betray each other. These things become common among every species. Join the 25th cycle of World war to see if this time Altasia selects its 7th overlord or not. Who will get the final seat of Monarch? WORLD WAR: The war between millions and billions of creatures, The place where thousand of behemoths like Giants, Dragons, Giamon, and monsters destroys. The place where many small but powerful creature shows their dominance like Elves, Humans, and Orcs. The place where vile creatures create chaos like Demon and Devil. The place where celestial creatures shine like Angles, and Fairy. This is the place where life has very little value, This is the place of Dreams. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS WORLD WAR OF ALTASIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ################## Note: Starting 20 chapters will have less detail. These chapters contain MC preparation before the main action start. I hope you will give this try for 30 chapters. WARNING: Not for below 17, There will be dark and gore stuff in the novel. ======================= English is not my first language. I hope if you find some problems let me know in the chapter comments. =======================

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This is kind of like my dream project, so I just want to know what a few of my readers think about this. I do not want to spoil it more just because of my bad skills.

So, guys, I want to know if I should continue writing this book like I already have around 50k more in draft or if I should rewrite them in a better way.

And yeah if you want me to have some improvements do mention it. You do not need to think about details but just point out which areas are there where I can improve.

like, say you want some character details and all.

If you have any complaints or anything does comment. I am open to all criticism no matter how harsh.

If you want me to continue without re-writing then mention it in a comment.

I am very serious about this book and after writing 100k words I just want to hear your opinion about this.

If even 5 people comment on here I will immediately start reworking on this book.

All I hope is to improve and give a story to yoo guys that just make ur day.

............ confuse ..... confuse ...... need some pointers.

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