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The nuclear test (Rough draft)

After the nuclear bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, the world was afraid of the might of nuclear threat. Due to this scientist tried to find a way to create a more controlled way to create a weapon. After a breakthrough, some scientists found a way to use nuclear waste and alter it in order to give people special powers. Numerous human experiments were made until finally there was a breakthrough. A little after this many advanced countries became able to succeed, however even if there was a breakthrough, the rate of people who were able to acquire powers after being exposed to the waste was still low. After numerous experiments in 1990, all the countries of the world decided to gather and sign a treaty to stop human experimentation. However, when the first generation of children was being born the radioactive molecules in the air gathered in different spots and created gates to different realms. These gates contained massive resources and along with it come monsters and new civilizations. These gates were successfully hidden from the public by governments around the world. It's now the year 2014, Luis is living a regular life in New York. Not liked by anyone, he was adopted his aunt's family due to his parents' death. His only moments of peace were when he trained his body and when he watched and read anime and manga, and hangs out with his cousin. One day during one of his runs a strange bag fell on him, which will lead to a change in his life.

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Author's notice(Don't need to read)

This is just a small notice coming from the author, so there's no need to read it if you don't feel like it.

Anyways, after careful consideration and a lot of thinking, I have decided to stop updating "The nuclear test" after I finish this school ark. This is not to say that I will be stopping completely but rather, I will be rewriting it. That's right! I will be rewriting the light novel, during this time I will not update the novel whatsoever so sorry for the inconvenience.

Now, what brought this on? A couple of reasons but mainly two things.

Firstly, the beginning is extremely shitty. The first few chapters feel rushed and full of holes, to me at least. Now, that is not to say that after the rewrite there won't be any more holes but I will be adding WAY more chapters at the beginning after the rework which brings this to my second point.

The second main reason why I'm rewriting this is two characters, Tara and Mary. Tara is dead and Mary was nowhere to be seen this entire time. However, even despite that, they are still some of the major driving forces behind Luis' behavior. I mean, Tara was dead and she was the main focus of most of the vigilante ark. And Mary, even though she was missing, had some parts in the last few parts of the Vigilante ark and has some presence in the school ark.

So when I rewrite I'll introduce these characters more and the exposition will be longer, but it will also be a different approach than it was before, you'll see what I mean... if you read it...

The vigilante ark will also receive more chapters and modifications but not as much, and the school ark may receive small tweaks to follow better the new storyline. One thing to keep in mind is that I won't be changing major plot points, whatever you think those may be, I'll leave it up to you guys' interpretation.

Now by, "stop updating" I mean that after the ark finishes I won't update at all until I finish most of my rewrite. Due to school, it may take anywhere between 3-5 months so... That's why I was a bit skeptical about doing this at first.

So I apologize to the people who have supported this little light novel but it's my final decision. Of course, there's still a long way to go with "this" light novel. So I won't be stopping the updates any time soon. This is just an announcement for the future. I might also delete the rough draft but I probably won't...

...Also, I slightly changed the name of the light novel just so this name can be open for the rewrite, hence the slight name change.

The whole thing is basically an author's thought, what else do you need?! Also, you guys see how erratic my writing can be without me "phrase checking"?

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