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The Broken Veil [Percy Jackson Story]

Imagine reality is a blanket, and that Blanket is stuck on loop. What do you think will happen to that blanket when the loop is broken? Ash Aten is the embodiment of ordinary, He's 16 and goes to school, plays games with his friends and works out to impress the ladies. Oh, I forgot to mention getting attacked by a Sand Wyrm in New York on his birthday. Percy Jackson AU! There will be hints of other supernatural worlds mixed in like Harry Potter and Marvel. Depending on what happens I may go into a MHA AU though that's only a possibility. Read, Leave a comment on how I can improve and go on with you day!

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Chapter 3: Age 4, Gaining Knowledge

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"---" is talking

'---' is thoughts

[---] is a higher being talking (gods are not included)

{---} System

Please leave a comment if you have something I can improve upon or if there is something you like!

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*Pov Ash*

'System, Show me my status'

{Status Table}

{Name: Ash Aten}

{Age: 4 Years}

{Race: Demi-god (Pantheon Block)}

{Title's: Champion of Apep, Momma's Boy}

{New Title, Momma's Boy: Give's the user a buff when protecting mothers from danger. buff varies from situation}

'Ugh, I didn't think my nickname would transfer over into a title, though I'll take any buff I can I guess' Ash at this point was deep in thought, what kind of elements would this world hold? was he transported into a D.C or Marvel world? if so then he'd be screwed if its the comics versions. Or was he in a world with a more hidden supernatural like Highschool DxD, while the women were great, he didn't want to deal with a loli killing him over a stupid reason. Though the women-

"Ash! come down for breakfast sweetie, I made your favorite falafel!' Amora would call as her voice would ring out through the massive condo, yes you heard that right both Ash and Amora lived in a luxurious condominium right in the heart of New York City. spouting a prominent 6 bedroom, each with their own walk in closets. 4 master bathrooms with a shower, tub and Amora's even has a jacuzzi. The living in which Ash was currently walking was decorated in gold, black and red decor in a more Egyptian style as Amora insisted on it. As he walked into the kitchen smelling the freshly made falafels, he got into his chair he ate with proper etiquette as he asked his mother same same question since he's been able to speak

"Mom, who's my father!" Ash spoke in a voice of authority, or as much authority as a 4 year old could muster.

"I've told you for the past 2 year's that you will find out when you are older. Just know he love's both of us more then the entire world pup" Amora would say in a sweet soft voice as she had done every morning. The two continued to eat in silence for a little while before Ash spoke again.

"You say that he love's us, but he hasn't even come seen you or me even once! he could be the busiest person on the planet but he couldn't even spare 1 hour to see his family? I don't get it" Ash, obviously knew there was more to his father but even with his previous 18 years of memories he couldn't stop the emotional imbalance all young children have.

"Ash...I can't tell you who your father is, as there are thing's bigger then me and him that prevent me from doing so. But I will tell you this, you will always be different from other people as you are born for something greater. If you want answers that bad, then the only way for you to get them is to have the power to take them, but also the wisdom to understand them. Please trust me when I say there is nothing more that your father want's then to come and stay with us. He love's you and me and would sacrifice his very being for us." Amora spoke in a voice that couldn't be defied or questioned in any means.

{System Notification, New Quest Unlocked}

Who's Your Daddy?

{Become strong and wise enough to handle the burden of knowing who your father is.

Requirement's: Be 12 or older, Travel to ???

Reward: Pantheon Unlocked, Divinity Inheritance Unlocked

{Warning! From gaining knowledge there shall always be a price}

'I see, so the only possibility is that my father is a god or some kind of higher being. Though that warning, I don't like it one bit'

"Alright, I'll stop asking. I'm going to head to my room now mom" Ash slowly moved from his seat to the sink where he would wash his dish and put it into the drying rack, what it's basic manners do you guy's not do it? As ash moved to and got to his room, we could see that it was filled with a numerous amount of books. if a certain hat saw this he would defiantly call Ash a Ravenclaw.

'System, open up my skills'

{Skills}

Intermediate Meditation (active): User may meditate with his eyes open when standing still. Grant's the user a buff to thought process and put's the user into a calmed state of mind (Upgradable)

???: User has not reached the requirements for this skill.

'Hmm, so it seems meditation is my only skill right now that I have access to, though that ??? is suspicious. System, how do skills scale? it says meditation is Intermediate'

{Skills scale as follows}

Novice, Intermediate, Advanced, Master, Grandmaster, Divine and ???.

Novice skills are skills that the user has basic understanding of (I.E Knowing how to throw a punch for boxing)

Intermediate Skills are novice skills that have a greater understanding (Learning how to meditate with eyes open)

Advanced Skills are skills regular beings rarely gain more then 1 of as their understanding of the skill is so pronounced that they could be one of the best in their field (I.e. Mike Tyson / Muhammed Ali for boxing)

Master skills are the absolute pinnacle of mortal understanding of a skill. People who have gained a master class skill are renowned throughout history. They are usually gained after cementing yourself into history (I.E Napoleon Bonaparte was a master class strategist leading 1000-1500 men straight into Paris with minimal loses)

{You are currently not allowed to view higher level skills}

'I see, looks like I'll have to train and struggle real hard to get to the pinnacle of power. Though I must not loose who I am as grandpa said. Alright! let's get started.'

Ash then proceeded to get into a perfect form for a push-up, at first he went down but then overestimated a 4 year old's strength

"come on! push! push! heave-ho! huff, huff, huff, never mind. I think I'll just start with going on run's" Ash would then proceed to lay on the floor, without the knowledge that someone may have taken a picture of his failure.

"fufufu, Ash looked so cute trying to do a push-up, I can't wait to show his future wife!' Amora giggled softly as she slowly walked away

Alright, Finally got to a chapter with 1000 words! now that I actually have an idea on how i want the story to go for the next 2 chapters I can push out more. May be another chapter later today, maybe not. Spent the last 8 hours doing college algebra / pre-calculus work so brains kinda bleh.

Once again please when we get to the point where you guys can leave comments tell me how I can improve, what you guys like and dislike and maybe some theroies about how you think the story will go!.

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