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Tensura: Broken Heart

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Lisez le roman Tensura: Broken Heart écrit par l'auteur GodOfPeacefulDeath publié sur WebNovel. Love, love, love, love who? "... That one person."Who is that person? Tell me who?"The one whose destiny entangled with mine to the point of existing as one."Existing as one? Is this even possible? Bu...

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Love, love, love, love who? "... That one person." Who is that person? Tell me who? "The one whose destiny entangled with mine to the point of existing as one." Existing as one? Is this even possible? But who will love you that much other than me? Tell me! Tell me! Tell me! "Fufu is this even a question, My wife..." Wife? You have gotten married even though you have me? I will kill her? I will drive her into madness. "You can't, she is already mad... Madly is in love with me..." Madly in love for... For what? "For love..." Why? Why? What is the reason? "To be loved..." By whom permission? "By love..." ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Credits to Rimuru6360, link for original on Wattpad -> https://www.wattpad.com/story/295691257

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Right now, I'm very mad at some people, I will not take their names, but after reading this review, they'll understand, So first of all, a person told me that my use of tenses is bad, I agree since English is my second language, and, you know that the grammar is going to be bad if you "read" the synopsis, and the author stated that English is their second language. However, that is a minor issue, the SAME person commented that MY FANFIC is a copy n paste of the Webnovel, just at a faster pace, NOW you tell ME that can you criticize a novel without READING IT COMPLETELY!? As of now there are 36 or 37 chapters, and they said this 'Your fic is complete copy n paste of the Webnovel, I'm disappointed' at chapter 9! Honestly, I'm more disappointed in readers like these. But I don't care anymore, This fic only has like, 58 or 59 chapters. And I'm gonna complete it in 2 days.

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